The Memories of Snow

December 8, 2017
By DarkPoet SILVER, Crosby, Texas
DarkPoet SILVER, Crosby, Texas
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As the cold breeze hit my shoulder,
I remember something that happen.
When it starts to snow,
I got a glimpse of my past.
As I exhaled my breath to the outside,
The clear breath turn into a  white smoke.
And got me thinking about something,
How all my past memorie was taken away
And exchanged me for the breeze
To be taken away.

But the precious  memories that i had from my past,
Were the only thing that keep me warm from the inside.
As the breeze passed toward me,
It took with him my tears and my shames.
And the thing that i remember,
Was playing with my childhood friends at school.
And the glimpse of my past,
Was looking at the window seeing my family playing outside.
And as i close my eyes,
I remember that i was running away by someone or something.
And he yelled,”I’m the one who you fear and I'm the one who can’t  be fear.”
“I’m the one who  can’t be escape,I’m the one who you always run away.’’
“I’m your past and fears’’ “I’m the real you,who you left behind.”
“I'm the one who roams in your mind” “I'm the one who yelled your sorrows.”
“Im who cried from the inside,” “I'm the one who you betray.”
“Your the one from the outside and I'm in the darkness of the inside.”
“I'm trying to escape but you never let me because you thought I’m the weakest one.”
“Your heart is cover by darkness and your mind is surrounded by losses and loneliness.” 
“Your the one who acts how people want to see, but don’t what to show who you really are”
“You the one who holds all the sadness, and the cause of being torture by your fears.”
“So don’t put me back the place where i been, and i will help you find the feelings that you left behind.”

As snow fall downs from the sky at night,
It covers everything that is in the ground,
But as morning start to bright.
In melts down the snow that's on the ground.
After it melts you can see that roses that were unseen.
You can see the beauty that was hidden underneath.   

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This article has 3 comments.

on Jan. 30 2018 at 7:55 am
WolfWhisperer0911 DIAMOND, Crosby, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"For I command you, be brave and steadfast! For the Lord your God will be with you whenever you go."
-Joshua 1:9

"Throw me to the wolves, and I'll return leading the pack."- Unknown

"Never moon a werewolf." -Mike Binder

@DarkPoet This so beautiful! The only thing I would critic is having the quotes go upon each other structurally like each space for each quote so that it can lead the eye without it getting confused.

on Jan. 12 2018 at 2:27 pm
DarkPoet SILVER, Crosby, Texas
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thanks for your comment!

on Dec. 25 2017 at 8:48 pm
un_named DIAMOND, Olympia, Washington
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This is really well written and a great concept. I would read through it and double check the grammar but other than that its perfect

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