Shower Thoughts

October 6, 2017
By KatGlow127 BRONZE, Flower Mound, Texas
KatGlow127 BRONZE, Flower Mound, Texas
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Maybe if I stand under the water
long enough my thoughts will go away,
Maybe if I never move,
this warm feeling will stay

 

Because when I step out that cold feeling returns,
Because when I leave images of you
Flood back to scald me like burns

 

Images invade my mind,
Bringing my tears in streams,
You’re a reminder of my broken heart and my broken dreams


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Michaelr397 said...
on Nov. 8 2017 at 12:05 am
On* not "son"

Michaelr397 said...
on Nov. 8 2017 at 12:03 am
This is extremely well done. The author knows how to relate to the audience son more than a personal level. Extremely insightful!


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