November 14, 2016
By Maegan99 BRONZE, Kalamazoo, Michigan
Maegan99 BRONZE, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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All the stores when I first walk in
Children filled with excitement
Long wait lines
Rides zooming around and around

The smell of desserts in the early morning air
Chocolate Chip Cookies, Cotton Candy, Cupcakes,
The taste of delicious entrèes

The different atmospheres from each land
Pops of air and water from a 3D show hitting my face
Hot sun beating down onto my already burnt shoulders
The feeling of happiness

Screaming from the old and young enjoying the attractions
The train whistling while it travels the perimeter of the park
Laughs from the families around me

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