#3

I
was swimming
The water
was beautiful as a
blue sphere

I went up
to drink my
Coca Cola

After I finished drinking,
I didn’t dive in,
instead I stood
I
N

F
R
O
N
T  of the pool
and faced
backward

Even though, it said
“NO FLIPPING”

S   L  O   W    L    Y
taking a deep breath,
I jumped
and flipped backward

But…
When I jumped
I slipped

BANG!!

I hit my back
to the
e
d g e of the
swimming pool
It hurts like someone stabbed a knife inqxto me
and I thought I died

After that,
I couldn’t move
for 3 long days

Theme: you should always follow the rules

#2

Fish that are not even gold,
But that are named gold
Are swimming

We bought
50 goldfish
In Vietnam
We poured them to a tank

Splash!

They swam very quickly
Like a sword fish

We fed them
They eat so slow
That I thought they were cows

I slept

Then,
10 of the goldfish died
When I woke up

Than, I did the samething over
As yesterday

Next day…

All of them died...

I was so upset             

That my tears filled up all of my room

The Final Draft

The stick

I have a stick
In my hand

Try
to aim
to my friend’s
Two wheel monster

I got mad like

          R
       H   O
I   T         W  my stick fast as I could

But it all happens
Very unexpectedly

2The stick went straight like an arrow
It struck to the monster’s wheel
But the arrow couldn’t beat the monster
And it bounced back
Like a boomerang

BANG!!!

The stick hit my head
It feels like someone sniped a bullet at me
And I thought I died

Now I thought to myself

“Why did I do that?”