Porcelain Doll

September 7, 2016
By AdriannaStoner BRONZE, Payson, Arizona
AdriannaStoner BRONZE, Payson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
“You write beautifully. The inside of your mind must be a terrible place.”

She is your porcelain doll, just don't throw her
Brain new and nothing wrong with her
Never touched, never used she’s just like new
As the years have gone by you notice her flaws
Her bright blue eyes are now dull
Her neat hair is now a mess
Her paint is chipping
She isn’t perfect
You dropped her
Over some flaws
How could she trust anyone again
She can’t

The author's comments:

This piece is about a girl but instead of saying gil shes a doll. She was perfect and as the years went by she started to show her flaws and the guy she was with left her over them. 

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