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When I am dead, my dearest, don’t stick my bones
together with Scotch tape. Do not try to fit them
underneath a frame. Use them, one by one,
as a weapon, a gavel. My bones,
they can be good back scratchers, honey mixers,
and hands of clocks.

You can toss them across space
and see how far they’ll glide until another hand
slips across it. When I am dead, dearest,
thread my bones to the top of a mountain.

The next time you arrive at a glass sea,
spill it boldly. Spell your life in two parts,
watch them float until they descend
like a weight down into that container.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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greystar said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 6:28 pm:
EXCELLENT
 
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sammie1997 said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 9:19 pm:
This is great! :) keep it up!
 
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GreenActress said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 6:18 pm:
Simlply amazing. I hope you keep writting, you're very imaginative, and creative and unique and talented. I loved this poem. You're awesome! Don't listen to the rude comments, and keep writting!!
 
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xxCMMx16 said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 9:38 am:
Good job!
 
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alessaxoxo said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:59 am:
This was very well though of and written. it had imagery in it good job :)
 
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RadLeY said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:55 am:
I like the way you used personification in this, Good Job.
 
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:)Shelbey(: said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 7:56 pm:
This is, well, simply amazing. (:
 
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Mary.LovegoodThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 6:53 pm:
Read in between the lines, and stop being so ignorant.
 
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SarahVS This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 11:25 pm:
Way to rip off Christina Rossetti's famous line.
 
KaytiE replied...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 9:07 am :

She did her line a favor!

This poem is AHH-MAZING!

 
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Alisha62293 said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 7:26 pm:

this is writen so beautifully. You did an amazing job =D

please read some of my work, thanks.

 
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WiseGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 4:22 pm:
This is really good!
 
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neimyne This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 7:16 pm:
Chilling~ I especially liked "Use them, one by one, as a weapon, a gavel." There is a definite story behind your words, and your lines seem almost to reassure and comfort.
 
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notebookgirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 7:51 am:
Wow, amazing work keep wrtiting
 
BasketballChick5 replied...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 8:55 pm :
i really this is was reallly good.
 
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MCRlover2011 said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 6:46 pm:
Wow... thts really good...
 
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wafflepawn said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 6:56 pm:
WWWOOOWWW!!!! "JiveTurkeyDude" how can you be so rude and stupid!!! this is probably one of the best poems I have read in the past five years. you arent looking past the text you have to read between the lines. maybe if you did that you wouldn't make such a fool out of yourself by saying "bones arent meant for weapons" i mean come on how foolish can you be!?!?! you are really rude and mean i do not appreciate you talking like this one bit!
PS. not nice!!!!!! >(
 
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JiveTurkeyDude said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 1:14 pm:
Wow Trev. You know you agree with me.
 
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STOP IT said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 1:12 pm:
Thats not very nice what your saying shes just an innocent young girl you jerk
 
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JiveTurkeyDude said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 1:01 pm:
100% Agree with "TheDude" You people are crazy...bones should be burried not made into weapons. Honestly this is where our world is going if you find these things good...THATS SICK! HAVE A NICE BONE FREE DAY :)
 
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