I Got the Joy! This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I got the joy
to pop the corn
side the walk
swing the set
mock the bird
glow the worm
gas the light

break the fast
ice the box
stair the well
school the boys
bubble the gum
french the kiss

yellow the fever
treasure the chest
miracle the grow
marry the gold
night the mare

jump the jack and back again
I believe
I believe I got it … that joy!

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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Dreammer said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 3:03 pm
:D good poem please read and comment on mine
Emily100 replied...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 3:08 pm
I will as soon as I find it!
Dreammer replied...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 3:33 pm
Thanks alot :D
Myrtle25 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 8:19 am
I loved your imagery and unconventional style. I just thought "yellow the fever" seemed like a weird and negative image in contrast to all the other ones, which are about joy and dominance- it would make more sense if that line was either changed or removed.
Emily100 replied...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 3:05 pm
I agree I like the imaganation to
livelovesmile said...
Sept. 17, 2011 at 11:27 am

Very cute!

Please comment and rate my new poem "Safe On A Cloud"!! And some of my other poems, because I'm new to TeenInk: "Girl Next Door", "Captured by Reflections" and "Longing For Those Days" ! 

I would really appreciate it! Thanks!

heartforwords said...
Sept. 4, 2011 at 5:11 pm
I love this poem because it's really childish and fun!! This is one of my favorites!!
Laura_Oliver said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 5:30 pm

That would make a great song, if you included a few more verses using a different patterns.

Plus, check out my poem, "True Colors" and leave some feedback.

Creatore said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 9:21 pm
This is so unique! It inspires a feeling of almost childlike joy, but in a way that people of any age can understand.
Me22895 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 7:03 pm
This made me smile. Thank you!!!!
ExpRESsY0uRselF said...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 10:56 am

Haha, this is a really cute poem! Loved it! Btw, if anyone has time, please check out my poem, The Girl Inside, and others. Thanks!!! :)


pics-with-no-paint replied...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 5:23 pm
I looked at your poem The Girl inside and it was amazing! Also if you have time could you check out my poem Flame? Its on a Forum.
reblep said...
May 16, 2011 at 8:52 pm
very creative. i never would have thought of something like that. 
xXprettybrowneyesXx said...
Apr. 25, 2011 at 12:41 pm
i really like the idea of this poem. where did you think up this structure?
shizuka said...
Apr. 3, 2011 at 8:50 pm
ur poem brings me some joy!
spency replied...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 8:23 am
wowwwwww... am loving it...itz great,keep the good work
Lexi-pex said...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 4:14 pm
this is such a unique poem - i love it! i like how you thought 'outside the box' it's really nice : )
Norma-Bernard said...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 3:18 pm
This poem is so good! I am new to Teen Ink and every piece I have read is amazing, but yours really sticks in my head. Your poem has given me the joy! Please check out some of my work!
EyesofBlueFire said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 4:26 pm
I thought that this poem was really pretty. :) It's uplifting.
TwinDemons said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 10:34 pm

Fun and random in a way, Cool!!! loved it!


Can you comment on some of my poems?

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