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If the Moon Bleeds

May 3, 2015
By JossM. SILVER, Lake Mary, Florida
JossM. SILVER, Lake Mary, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
It's only after we've lost everything that we're free to do anything.


Come with me and we will walk through the shreds of forest light
Then in the cracks of leafy green we'll lie and watch the starry night
We'll make a temporary home between the spots of massive trees
In the patch of the woods where the moonlight bleeds

Sunlight burned through the cotton sky
Glimmering through and blinding my eyes
My lungs grew gardens, you made them grow
Once fresh air now makes me choke
You bloomed roses in my cheeks
You ran rivers through my veins
You were the soil under my feet
You made me breathe hurricanes

But now the flowers wilt and the waters run cold
The branches hang limp with no leaves to hold
Frozen solid and all seems lost
A heart encased in permafrost
Snow in my nose
Mist in my mouth
Hail down my throat
Too far south 

Now I suffocate in the air of memories that start to fade
And bury myself in the ones that we never even made
I spit grey smoke between my teeth and out into the winter air
And pray I'll awake to see that you're still lying with me there
I’m a fish and they all say there are plenty others in the sea
But you're the water, I'm stuck on land, and I really need to breathe


The author's comments:

I really hope this isn't awful. Sorry if it is. 


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__aleee BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2015 at 4:49 pm
__aleee BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Carpe Diem"


__aleee BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2015 at 4:46 pm
__aleee BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Carpe Diem"

You write beautifully! I truly enjoyed reading this! Can you please read my work? Thanks; it would mean the world to me!

JossM. SILVER said...
on Jun. 6 2015 at 3:35 am
JossM. SILVER, Lake Mary, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
It's only after we've lost everything that we're free to do anything.

These comments mean the world to me and are making me ecstatic. Thank you so much for your words of encouragement!

on Jun. 5 2015 at 1:30 pm
OdysseyChild PLATINUM, Clermont, Florida
32 articles 3 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am a citizen of the world, an a student of the universe.

this is amazing, straight forward an stromg.the tight pulled me in for an unforgettable journey,that I am desperate to take again. Amelokoye@twitter

on Jun. 5 2015 at 12:21 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
LOOK AT MY PROFILE. DO IT.

This is absolutely beautiful. It makes me wonder why it's not #1 yet, because it definitely should be! I love this poem so much and it is amazing, so great job and keep writing!!!

on May. 31 2015 at 9:48 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

This is the best rhymed poem I've read in a long time here on TI, You write beautifully, Joss, and I hope you keep doing it.