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And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.

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Hannah24 said...
Dec. 23, 2012 at 10:24 pm
this is so beautiful, it really flows well
 
blondie707 said...
Dec. 18, 2012 at 2:38 pm
This is very beautiful.
 
alllllijah replied...
Dec. 18, 2012 at 5:32 pm
wow you got that right wait what poem are you reading
 
flaflafla said...
Nov. 8, 2012 at 4:05 pm
Very well written, but dark.... Good Job anyway :)
 
audreylouiseee said...
Nov. 8, 2012 at 4:01 pm
This is a really insprational poem. I feel bad for you. I can really feel you through this poem. It was a good and intriguing to read. I was written really well.
 
AddieB said...
Nov. 8, 2012 at 3:30 pm
This is a good poem and really has feeling. I hope you keep writing more and get deeper.
 
Ashley Y. said...
Nov. 8, 2012 at 3:27 pm
That is so sad, I'm so sorry.
 
colorguardgrl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 8, 2012 at 9:26 am
Beautiful. Absolutitly beautiful.
 
ShiningLight said...
Nov. 8, 2012 at 6:31 am
This peom is full of emotion.  I can releate because I know a friend who lost her father, he was kind of like a second father to me as well.  But back to your poem. It has good rhythm and conveys deep emotion. It is a little repetitive, but to me that just enforces the story and meaning. 
 
radicalchicksterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 23, 2012 at 12:29 pm
Personally, I think you're a great writer, but that it could defintely use more work.
 
The_Quiet_Girl said...
Oct. 18, 2012 at 6:34 pm
Sad but beautiful. Great work. :)
 
Something16 said...
Oct. 17, 2012 at 7:20 pm
The message was really great and I can relate to it. But it didnt spark any real emotion in me. But I did like it.
 
kaiterbug said...
Oct. 17, 2012 at 12:21 pm
First of all I will start off by saying that your poem is ok. The meaning of your poem was clear and cohesive throughout and I applaud you for that. I will not sit here and tell you I know what you’re character is feeling because I don’t. I feel like you should have tried to evoke more empathy than sympathy. I think a poem is more effective when you use empathy (relating to people who feel the same as you do) than just simply having them give you sympathy (feel sorry for you). The fl... (more »)
 
writingriver05 replied...
May 11, 2013 at 1:59 pm
sorry to grade your post but to alot of people this poem wont make sense probally only to those who lost what she lost ok?
 
Berenice U. said...
Oct. 17, 2012 at 12:20 pm
I  really enjoyed your poem.It uses imagery and describes clearly how you feel at that point in time.
 
vividoom said...
Oct. 17, 2012 at 10:06 am
i feeel like this peice is very realistic and very relatable because i lost my mom very young and it describes how i felt exactly so keep up the good work
 
TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 25, 2012 at 11:51 pm
Wow, beautiful poem :) You conveyed the emotions perfectly...
 
Magnetar said...
Sept. 22, 2012 at 3:14 pm
This is a powerful poem that conveys deep emotion.
 
PoeticTwirler This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 1:21 pm
Yout poem was absolutly beautiful. I was able o feel your emotions. Wonderful job!
 
Shaniawaloven said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 10:54 am
I really like your poem. I understand what you mean, but it was my dad who died. Great work!
 
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