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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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inkers GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 11:15 pm
inkers GOLD, Midland, Texas
10 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And the lamplight gloating o'er him threw his shadow on the floor... and my soul from out that shadow... shall be lifted, nevermore!" - Poe

This was very powerful. I loved it.
I will say that every time you wrote "And I remember..." it felt like it should have been a new stanza.
But even so, this was so ridiculously good. You portrayed your emotion successfully.

on Jun. 21 2011 at 1:52 pm
tatertot1311 BRONZE, Johnson, Vermont
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dance like no one is watching you"

This is such a beautiful poem filled with so much emotion. Especially since many people can relate to the story. Wonderful job!

on Jun. 21 2011 at 11:48 am
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
23 articles 3 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
eARTh

Pretty amazing! Check out my stuff! I'd really like some feedback!

Samantha E. said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 10:05 am
I completely agree!

Samantha E. said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 10:05 am
agreed!      

slb94 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 8:38 am
slb94 BRONZE, Hopkinton, Massachusetts
3 articles 3 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Before you've practiced, the theory is useless. After you've practiced, the theory is obvious."

Wonderful, It puts everything in perspective. Much needed, thank you

on Jun. 19 2011 at 5:56 pm
heyuamber BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
3 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"As artists, we are eternally heartbroken."

this is beautiful my birthmother passed away at fifteen so I understand 

on Jun. 18 2011 at 8:06 pm
Aubreylax PLATINUM, Pomfret Center, Connecticut
22 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Give in to love, or live in fear

My mom died when I was young too. You capture the emotion so well! Kudos

LilBoo BRONZE said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 7:29 pm
LilBoo BRONZE, Martinsville, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 9 comments
I love the part when you bring other people into the picture. because some people really dont understand how lucky they are to have a mother. i feel you, and im sorry for your loss. this poem is amazing. keep on writing

on Jun. 13 2011 at 11:03 am
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

This was simply amazing. (: please check out some of mystuff!

on Jun. 12 2011 at 3:23 pm
freeflow23 GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
15 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Saul saw Goliath as too big to kill. David saw he was too big to miss.
W.W.J.D.

I enjoyed the style in which this was written. Unique. Straightforward.

on Jun. 10 2011 at 12:22 pm
brender1017 BRONZE, Miami, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
things happen for a reason

i feel you in this one i lost my grandma she was like a second mother to me and i know what it feels and it makes me now after reading your poem vaue my mom than i have ever done

really nice and sad poem !


on Jun. 3 2011 at 3:03 pm
Clarissa21 BRONZE, Gervais, Oregon
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Im truly sorry for you lost.

Hope everything is okay

Everything gonna be okay

 

 


Eliseee BRONZE said...
on May. 31 2011 at 11:59 pm
Eliseee BRONZE, Lynwood, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bravery is when your the only person that knows your scared.

I love this poem!!! I can def.ly relate

CourtneyJ GOLD said...
on May. 30 2011 at 11:46 pm
CourtneyJ GOLD, Columbia, South Carolina
17 articles 11 photos 7 comments
This poem made me thinl of my grandmother who died six years ago. All the emotions i felt when i lost her were all displayed in this poem.

on May. 30 2011 at 8:17 pm
MhsAnonymous SILVER, Morristown, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a dream. Its perfect until you wake up into reality.

You have great talent! Please keep writing. I would love to read more of your work.

M_IML DIAMOND said...
on May. 30 2011 at 7:22 pm
M_IML DIAMOND, Ganei Tikva, Other
78 articles 0 photos 61 comments
I love the way you've taken your sadness and made it into something so beatiful. Keep writing!

on May. 30 2011 at 12:16 pm
CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM, Pearland, Texas
24 articles 6 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, it's yours, if it doesn't, it never was." - Unknown

I'm sorry about your mother. But I loved this poem. You're really talented, you have to keep writing. I've read your other poetry and you're amazing (: I wish I could write like you. Absolutely beautiful work. 

on May. 30 2011 at 9:47 am
ArianaNightengale GOLD, Desloge, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love conquers everything. . . Except stab wounds and poisoning." --Seattle Reperatory Theatre

You have pretty darn awesome poetry writing skills. . . And a pretty darn sad poem.

spency SILVER said...
on May. 30 2011 at 7:37 am
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"

das so sad...well good job