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December 17, 2008
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And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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today at 1:13 pm
Wow this is powerful and emotional I love it! I can relate to losing someone it's rough I know. Your writing is flawless. If you can, please look at my poem called reality.
 
HammadWaseemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 9 at 9:26 am
Nice and amazing @Elizabeth2001 by the way will you check and comment on my teen ink dance video, "The Unbeatable Breakdancer"? :)
 
Elizabeth2001 said...
Jan. 18 at 8:37 am
This made me cry because I can relate to losing my mother and hearing people say they hate they're mothers and I just want to be like a least you have on to come home to. You should keep writing you did a good job.
 
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Dec. 11, 2017 at 4:25 am
Fantastic poem,very nice
 
BreezetteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 8, 2017 at 2:05 pm
That is the best poem ever, like for real.
 
EmpressPenn said...
Jul. 26, 2017 at 11:25 am
*snaps* that is DEEP!!
 
SsnehaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 4, 2017 at 6:50 am
Wow. I really love this.
 
Isabell_Pilarski said...
Apr. 12, 2017 at 1:02 pm
Love it.It's amazing
 
HereSheIs said...
Apr. 7, 2017 at 4:44 pm
Woah I love it. So emotional and perfect, especially the lines about her glasses
 
Jenifer_cornejoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 8, 2016 at 1:28 pm
wow this is really great you used very good description ,imagery , very good hook and ending.
 
ZOEDETTMER said...
Oct. 13, 2016 at 11:08 pm
GREAT JOB XXXXX
 
Ebaby said...
Oct. 13, 2016 at 11:08 pm
This is very emotional and deep. I love the feels it gives me.
 
ZOEDETTMER said...
Oct. 13, 2016 at 11:06 pm
SO GOOD, I HAD SO MANY EMOTIONS GOING THROUGH ME JUST COULD'NT PUT A HANDLE ON IT XXXX
 
ChelseaRowley said...
Oct. 13, 2016 at 11:06 pm
so many emotions in one poem omg cant handle it!xxx
 
fatcakes said...
Oct. 13, 2016 at 10:53 pm
that is very deep and personal. thank you or sharing. that was a great poem
 
pineappler03 said...
Aug. 5, 2016 at 12:29 pm
So much emotion is here. It's mazing how you can take such a sad memory, and put it into your readers head. It's almost like we live within the plot as we read the poem. Amazing job.
 
DebbieCupcake said...
May 27, 2016 at 10:51 pm
This is very good. I love it. I could really feel your emotion. Great work
 
RaucousRaven said...
Mar. 15, 2016 at 7:42 pm
Great work! Far better than #1 you deserve that placement.
 
ScarletBaka said...
Jan. 8, 2016 at 11:04 pm
SO SWEET!!! AHH IM TOUCHED :((
 
Eric_XuThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 29, 2015 at 9:41 pm
Reading this was heartwrenching. I've never lost someone that close to me before, but this impacted me very emotionally. You're very talented at this, good job!
 
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