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Don't Let Go

March 24, 2015
By Estar15 BRONZE, West Valley, New York
Estar15 BRONZE, West Valley, New York
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Eager to move, I began to crawl.
Inch by inch, I learned to walk.
Step after step,
fall after fall,
exploring new things,
I wanted it all. 

In the blink of an eye,
my feet went wilder.
From tiny, tedious steps,
to strides that put the stars in my grasp,
nothing could slow me down.

Wide-eyed and dreaming
of the journey more than the destination,
there are no limits to where
these feet may take me.

Grandpa says dreams are like balloons:
don’t let go
or they’ll simply
float away.

I tell him,
My balloons are
bold and brilliantly red
and double knotted ‘round my wrists.

He smiles
because he knows
I’m ready to soar.



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on Mar. 25 2015 at 1:53 pm
DreamersJourney SILVER, Old Massett, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The best thing you can do is the right thing, the next best thing you can do is the wrong thing. The worst thing you can do is nothing."
"Decide to have an attitude of gratitude, you can become bitter or better."
"beYOUtiful, everyone else is taken."

Uniquely wonderful. Well put, it's simply lovely:)

Estar15 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 25 2015 at 1:20 pm
Estar15 BRONZE, West Valley, New York
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Thanks! @Chrissiana1320

on Mar. 25 2015 at 2:34 am
Chrissiana1320 BRONZE, Hypoluxo, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"It isn't what you can do with your strength, but how you chose to use."


















-By me, I think.

This is beautifully written Estar 15. I love the way you joined it all together to put it into something sweet. And i also love the message it is giving the reader, about not letting go of your dreams or they'll simply float away. It's great how you compared balloons to dreams. Love it! Write on!