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Drowning Deeper

February 6, 2015
By Redcherry27 SILVER, Easton, Pennsylvania
Redcherry27 SILVER, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a good Journey"



As I go deeper and deeper the people
Shouting my name as if I'm lost
Didn't they get my note?
I try to come up to the surface but I can't breathe anymore or even move.
They can't miss me.
I'm going down deeper and deeper
I hear my name being called out
Oh dear I love this one calling my name
But why is he crying he can't miss me.
Search and rescue looking in the water as they see my phone by the shore with look in the lake on my phone.
I finally hit the bottom Oh no the rocks.
I regret this decision cause now my family have to plan a funeral.
I'm being pulled up to shore.
They feel my neck for a pulse.
The one I love down on his knees crying. I've never seen him cry.
They try CPR but guess what I'm long gone that I'm pale and blue on my lips.
Everyone at the funeral I swear I'm going down drowning deeper and deeper.
Now I'm dead and I love you all.


The author's comments:

What inspired me to write this was how I felt one day and it was just so empowering to me. My friend on 7cups of tea told me I should publish it here. So I did. I got bullied the day I wrote this and I felt it was moving. My best friend Nate has been by my side through everything. He's my rock. 


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