My Eternal Universe MAG

December 12, 2014
By too-normal-to-function GOLD, Natick, Massachusetts
too-normal-to-function GOLD, Natick, Massachusetts
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And I could have held your fingertips,
like stars,
in my palm for hours.
And I could have stood mesmerized for years
by your pupils dilating,
like black holes,
sucking in my soul.
And I could have watched your smile,
as bright and explosive as a supernova,
for a millennium.
And I could have waited forever,
for your heart
like the moon,
filling me with light
and then leaving me in the dark.

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on Dec. 22 2014 at 9:11 pm
CastAway BRONZE, Bryan, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

I honestly wanted to cry while reading this. What beautiful imagery you used. So many people would have taken years to find the right words to describe this feeling. You are a true artist of words. Keep writing.

on Dec. 22 2014 at 6:04 pm
fortheloveofwriting GOLD, A Place, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Art washes from the soul the dust of everyday life."
~Pablo Picasso

Love is patient, love is kind; it does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud.
1 Corinthians 13:4
A man's ways are his own, but the LORD weighs the heart.

This is really good! Way to go! :)

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