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Lonliness

December 18, 2014
By MiniDC BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
MiniDC BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
" I am beautiful I know I am beautiful and no one can tell me I'm not


The feeling of loniless can be so hard to bear

I scream the words of sadness but no one seems to hear

they scowl at me

push past me in the halls

they dont seem to care, if i utter a cry or fall

they don't seem to know

they dont seem to care

if the feeling of dislike or hate for me

is sadly mistaken

or the key that holds my life

is about to be taken

my life is a game

a stupid waste of time

i don't want it to be like that

please tell me my life is worth

more than a rusty dime



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JJMAC GOLD said...
on Jan. 15 2016 at 2:31 pm
JJMAC GOLD, Okaton, South Dakota
15 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fire can't put out fire, only water can do that.


People who fight FIRE with FIRE BURN there houses down TWICE as FAST.

Again you rock, I like how you pratray pain and well, it's good work. :)

MiniDC BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2015 at 10:07 am
MiniDC BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
" I am beautiful I know I am beautiful and no one can tell me I'm not

Thanks a lot!!!! I now know what people are interested in

on Jan. 4 2015 at 8:55 am
lucille54321 BRONZE, Ann Arbor, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Knowing is better than wondering, waking is better than sleeping, and the biggest failure beats the hell out of never trying.

This is great! I really like how you convey the feelings of sadness.