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Spring things are beautiful:
Petals, crimson and ocher,
And arrogant boulders radiant
With moss and loneliness,
The ocean, spacious and frail,
Sauntering, but smooth
Aroused by the striding sea gulls
Who screech at the genteel fish.

And autumn things are beautiful:
Leaves, supple and earthy,
That whisk unnoticed from their home,
And squirrels gathering food,
Foxes that chase marble geese
From their cozy, foxy pups.
The rainbow from a
Stormy night polishing the ancient sun.

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Fia-fiaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 2 at 10:21 pm:

Really good! Its a great description, almost a caparison even if you didnt phrase it that way! Great language... thank you

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laurensoccerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 9 at 5:57 pm:
Your descriptions and vocabularly are creative and amazing. This is one of my favorite poems ever!!!!! I would really appreciate it if you could check out and comment on some of my work. Thanks.
 
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NathanBThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 18 at 7:50 pm:
Wow! Really great. Your a great writer, I love this poem so much!!!! Please check out some of my stuff!
 
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youngspeareThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 8:48 am:
Good job! :)
Could you check out my poem "Ghosts of the Past" and rate/ comment? Would really appreciate it. 
 
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Mimi15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 7:57 pm:
Sweet (: Check out some of my stuff.
 
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purplequeenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 10:36 am:
Can you check out my work and rate it?
 
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purplequeenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 10:35 am:
Ohh... nice
 
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starlight26This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 11:13 am:
Please check out some of my work if you get a chance!! :)
 
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starlight26This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 11:12 am:
GREAT Imagery!! I really liked this. Especially because my birthday is in autumn and i feel so connected to the world in the fall/spring months. LOVED IT!
 
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Aristine said...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 12:11 am:
Nice use of imagery in here- there are some pretty vivid descriptions. You chose your words well, and the ending was great.
 
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alaska_kare_bear said...
May 12, 2010 at 9:25 pm:
Really like the use or words
 
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Shambler92 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:19 pm:
those two stanzas are really beautiful, but I feel there's a third one missing, a stanza to give meaning to the poem. anyways,, good work man.
 
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CountryGothicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 11:11 am:
This is beautiful and I want to see you post more!
 
ThermadorianGrey replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 7:38 pm :
Great details in here.  Certainly good enough to warrant the exclusion of the bland beginning "spring things are beautiful."  Other than that, very well executed.
 
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NicoveraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 3:40 pm:
Love this! Keep writing!
 
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AmberOstranderThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 2:32 pm:
this is very enjoyable
 
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epcelia said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 10:02 pm:
LOVE THIS!<3 hehe good job!
 
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InkspiredThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 9:39 am:
Wonderful description! Great job!
 
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kendraelysia This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 4:30 pm:
Incredible flow and use of words.
 
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dramalover121 said...
Sept. 15, 2009 at 8:11 pm:
It's beautiful.
 
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silent_16 said...
Jul. 20, 2009 at 8:25 pm:
beautiful
 
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dot.! said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 2:27 pm:
deep, intricate.... amazing. i loved it!! i wish i could write like that. love the emotion you put in there! it made me feel so peaceful and calm as i read it...
can you please tell me what you think of my poem??
http://www.teenink.com/raw/Poetry/article/91361/Trapped
thanks!!
 
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Shanon said...
Mar. 30, 2009 at 3:52 pm:
This is a nice poem. It has all of the componets for a poem
 
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Alaira said...
Mar. 23, 2009 at 3:41 pm:
I love the images I get. It was very well written, keep writing.
 
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teenpoet said...
Mar. 22, 2009 at 1:33 pm:
Your use of imagery was really creative and inspiring. I loved the vocabulary and the emotions you get from reading this poem. Great job!
 
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project827 said...
Mar. 15, 2009 at 7:20 pm:
wow. *speechless* . . .
 
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whatwehavelost said...
Mar. 14, 2009 at 8:50 pm:
your use of imagery was breathtaking
i only read this poem because of a memorie i had with a very good friend her favorite season is spring and mine is fall but i am very glad o chose to read it it was great
 
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Kendra M. said...
Mar. 13, 2009 at 5:51 pm:
This is very detailed the Autumn part reminds me of the wooded area around my house during the fall months.
 
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Mary B. said...
Mar. 6, 2009 at 3:27 pm:
this is great! i would love to see how you describe summer and winter
 
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aubrey H. said...
Mar. 6, 2009 at 3:17 am:
OMG! I really enjoyed the poem. ( I know you probably hear this alot...) I love the imagery you create. I REALLY like the last line. It satisfies, but also leaves you hungry for more!!!
 
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Christina This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 4, 2009 at 12:44 pm:
I feel like this could have used something to tie the spring stanza and the fall stanza together. The imagery, however, is absolutely stunning.
 
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Duckie430This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 3, 2009 at 2:12 pm:
the imagery in this beautiful. i love it.
 
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kissingdawn331 said...
Mar. 3, 2009 at 8:18 pm:
where were you when you wrote this...i want to go
 
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MeganCahillThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 1, 2009 at 5:56 pm:
This was beautifully written. You gave your imagery so perfectly I felt I was in Spring, then Autumn, in a matter of two seconds. Wonderful vocabulary.
 
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