On Love MAG

January 2, 2009
By neshkuh GOLD, Lower Mainland, Other
neshkuh GOLD, Lower Mainland, Other
18 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Those lucky enough to find it
Will throw it away.
Those who cannot see it
Will scorn it.
And all the while
Someone out there
Will be wishing
For a chance at both.



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hahard said...
on Apr. 4 2012 at 7:52 pm
hahard, Doylestown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Given a choice between grief and nothing, I'd choose grief."
William Faulkner

incredible. this peice is an ode to the reality of what "love" is like for different people. it seems that too often people are so focused on thier persepctive that its like you cant see the other. so thank you for opening the persepective.

on Feb. 24 2012 at 9:40 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Exactly what love is~ Couldn't have explained it better.

on Feb. 2 2012 at 9:21 pm
laurensoccer SILVER, Palm Beach Gardens, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 67 comments
BEAUTIFUL piece of writing!!!!!!!

on Jan. 8 2012 at 10:24 am
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
49 articles 0 photos 74 comments
This is uber perfect. Check out my poem 'On our Own'? Thanks and Keep Writing!!

on Jan. 8 2012 at 12:49 am
HannahMarie17 BRONZE, Pasadena, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning to dance in the rain." - Anonymous

Beautiful. Short and sweet and inredibly meaningful and truthful. Thank you for sharing (and teaching a long-winded person a lesson in the beauty of brevity) and please keep writing!

on Aug. 29 2011 at 5:52 pm
livelovesmile GOLD, Gaithersburg, Maryland
19 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am like a star burst. A juicy contradiction. I'm hard to figure out, but when you get to my center, your suprised! It's not what you thought it would be, huh.

I loved the sharpness of reality in this poem! very realistic and well done!

If you could, i would appreciate it if anyone took the time to read and comment on my poetry for i really want some feedback. Thanks!


on Aug. 20 2011 at 9:04 pm
CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
17 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I believe in as many as six impossible things before breakfast" - Lewis Carroll

very real

and good job getting it into teenink's MAG

love it :D


on Jul. 30 2011 at 1:04 pm
devikaarora GOLD, New Delhi, Hawaii
17 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont tell me sky is the limit when there are footsteps on the moon !

Awesome! :)

IamRevy BRONZE said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 4:37 pm
IamRevy BRONZE, State Of Mind, Other
4 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Trying to please the world is a self-made curse"

Lovely write-up.True talk, deep words! Pls check out my poems, would really wanna hear all of u great teenink writers point of view. Would be lovely. HEAD TO THE WEST PIECE HERE  piece TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/349259/Head-To-The-West/
 
MY LETTER TO JULIET PIECE! 
TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/349256/MY-LETTER-TO-JULIET/
 
MY MISSING RIB PIECE! 
TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/349126/My-Missing-Rib/
GRAND PUPPETEER POEM! 
TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/347776/GRAND-PUPPETEER/httpTeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/349126/My-Missing-Rib/

on Jul. 16 2011 at 3:53 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
11 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

Totally true! Amazing work!

on Jul. 16 2011 at 3:18 pm
KandiceMichelle PLATINUM, Stansonburg, North Carolina
24 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yet God has made everything BEAUTIFUL for its own time. He has planted ETERNITY in the human heart, but even so, people cannot see the whole scope of God's work from beginning to end." -Ecclesiastes 3:11

I love this poem because it was 100% true.

on Jun. 24 2011 at 6:25 pm
Fullyalive15 SILVER, Olathe, Kansas
9 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams."~Dr.Suess

Understated, which makes it beautiful. 

on Jun. 2 2011 at 12:27 pm
DallasCox SILVER, Wallingford, Kentucky
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I love short poems.
This is amazing. [=

on May. 11 2011 at 8:49 pm
i really like this , yhu should keep working :D , 

on Mar. 28 2011 at 1:34 pm
Morgan Cannon BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments
Short but so meaningful and rings so much truth! Great job

on Mar. 6 2011 at 8:52 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

wow. so short, yet so powerful. amazing talent right there:)

Alia_Tan GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2011 at 1:42 pm
Alia_Tan GOLD, Elk Grove, California
15 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I gotta right to sing the blues/
gotta right to moan and sigh/
I gotta right to sit and cry" From "I gotta right to sing the blues" By Louis Armstrong

same here :) great job!

Maximum BRONZE said...
on Feb. 12 2011 at 4:59 pm
Maximum BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Go to @#!*%
-Sure thing. Want me to save you a seat?

wow...I can't agree more

on Dec. 8 2010 at 4:54 pm
Machiavellian BRONZE, Nobord, Iowa
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Curious, how often you humans manage to obtain that which you do not want. - Spock

Very beautiful (:

Setsuna said...
on Dec. 8 2010 at 4:37 pm
Setsuna, Omega, Georgia
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments
Well said! But a little pessimistic.


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