On Love

incredible. this peice is an ode to the reality of what "love" is like for different people. it seems that too often people are so focused on thier persepctive that its like you cant see the other. so thank you for opening the persepective.

Exactly what love is~ Couldn't have explained it better.

BEAUTIFUL piece of writing!!!!!!!

This is uber perfect. Check out my poem 'On our Own'? Thanks and Keep Writing!!

Beautiful. Short and sweet and inredibly meaningful and truthful. Thank you for sharing (and teaching a long-winded person a lesson in the beauty of brevity) and please keep writing!

I loved the sharpness of reality in this poem! very realistic and well done!

If you could, i would appreciate it if anyone took the time to read and comment on my poetry for i really want some feedback. Thanks!

very real

and good job getting it into teenink's MAG

love it :D

Awesome! :)

Lovely write-up.True talk, deep words! Pls check out my poems, would really wanna hear all of u great teenink writers point of view. Would be lovely. HEAD TO THE WEST PIECE HERE  piece http://teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/349259/Head-To-The-West/
 
MY LETTER TO JULIET PIECE! 
http://teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/349256/MY-LETTER-TO-JULIET/
 
MY MISSING RIB PIECE! 
http://teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/349126/My-Missing... (more »)

Totally true! Amazing work!

I love this poem because it was 100% true.

Understated, which makes it beautiful. 

I love short poems.
This is amazing. [=

i really like this , yhu should keep working :D , 

Short but so meaningful and rings so much truth! Great job

wow. so short, yet so powerful. amazing talent right there:)

wow...I can't agree more

Very beautiful (:

Well said! But a little pessimistic.