On Love

incredible. this peice is an ode to the reality of what "love" is like for different people. it seems that too often people are so focused on thier persepctive that its like you cant see the other. so thank you for opening the persepective.

Exactly what love is~ Couldn't have explained it better.

BEAUTIFUL piece of writing!!!!!!!

This is uber perfect. Check out my poem 'On our Own'? Thanks and Keep Writing!!

Beautiful. Short and sweet and inredibly meaningful and truthful. Thank you for sharing (and teaching a long-winded person a lesson in the beauty of brevity) and please keep writing!

I loved the sharpness of reality in this poem! very realistic and well done!

If you could, i would appreciate it if anyone took the time to read and comment on my poetry for i really want some feedback. Thanks!

very real

and good job getting it into teenink's MAG

love it :D

Awesome! :)

Lovely write-up.True talk, deep words! Pls check out my poems, would really wanna hear all of u great teenink writers point of view. Would be lovely. HEAD TO THE WEST PIECE HERE  piece http://teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/349259/Head-To-The-West/
 
MY LETTER TO JULIET PIECE! 
http://teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/349256/MY-LETTER-TO-JULIET/
 
MY MISSING RIB PIECE! 
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Totally true! Amazing work!

I love this poem because it was 100% true.

Understated, which makes it beautiful. 

I love short poems.
This is amazing. [=

i really like this , yhu should keep working :D , 

Short but so meaningful and rings so much truth! Great job

wow. so short, yet so powerful. amazing talent right there:)

wow...I can't agree more

Very beautiful (:

Well said! But a little pessimistic.

i Love itt Gurrrlll!!!!...keep it up Girl!!!!!lolxx!

I like it. Keep up the good work! :D

this is really beautiful.....im left speechless

Short and sweet. I like it. keep up the good work

too truee good work :)

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This is true. Excellent job

this is really good and so true. please check out my new poem!

simple and sweet. i like it(;

really makes you think

I'm biting on my nails and my earings don't match. "They do too" my inner conscience said.  Then, the big cheese spoke.  And she said, in her creepy, pointed cap, "you are obviously not listening to the wind (which is Mongolian), and have lost the meaning of your own words, which probably came from someone else (osmisisly speaking)."  Irish wristwatches are impossible.

It was short and simple but had so much meaning :)

that is ezactly what has been going through my mind. couldnt have said it better.

so simple
yet so true
read my stuff??
plz

Very sweet and touching. It feels so wistful and poignant.

So true. Love the feeling this poem gives you.

I think the title does rather fine, for the body of a poem, or any piece for that matter, should fully express itself. How would you describe Shakesperian sonnets, which are given numbers... Title is less important than content.

Awesome poem. Short, sweet, to the point and powerful. Great job :)

very true.. great voice.

I like this, very relateable

great
its worded well

soo true :)

O my gosh...I love this. I can SO relate. I don't have it, and I want it, but someone I knew had it from who I wanted it from, and they just THREW IT AWAY. I know why, but it was unfair......she knows it was to, and doesn't feel bad about it. I LOVED IT

sad for me

so simple but captivating. i love poems like this.

It's great work, and I really like it. But I prefer longer poems. Plus, I can't see what the title has to do with the poem. No offense intended.

I love this. It is so cute.

Okayy Woah. I've Heard this Before.. Like.. SOmewhere Else... I Don't Know Where.. But I Feel Like I've Heard It Somewhere Else...