All I See is You

February 21, 2014
A billion men could turn me down,
Could turn me away.
Could look at me with stone cold eyes,
Then walk the other way.

A million boys could laugh at me,
Find no beauty in my soul.
Could giggle at my flaws,
And watch me pay the toll.

A thousand girls could pity me,
Have no faith I’d find my way.
But I don’t care what they think,
Or what they have to say.

All I find myself thinking,
All I pray and wish for,
All I dream and care about,
Is something worth a little more.

That something is you,
So alive, so bright.
I want you with everything I have,
With all of my might.

Those blue eyes,
That heart so golden to the core.
That laugh and infectious smile,
Makes me fall deeper than before.

It only matters what you see in me,
How you feel about our love.
How happy I am when we are together,
And how all the doubts and pain, I am free of.





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Mustacheofthelorax said...
Mar. 13, 2014 at 3:46 pm
Reading your poem, I was inspired by the confidence that radiates from your writing. Seriously, pat yourself on the back...your poem is great!
 
bebeflow07 said...
Mar. 4, 2014 at 9:24 pm
I think that this could've been better, but it's ok. This boy obviously means a lot to you but it feels like I'm reading this out of some cliche love letter. Give a story to us, a plot, a meaning, something unique. I've never had a boyfriend, but show me what it's like. Not to be mean or rude, I just think that this could improve, that's all, but it's a good idea.
 
Authorintraining88 replied...
Mar. 5, 2014 at 5:31 pm
Thank you for the advice! Re-reading this again I totally see what you mean!
 
Misslauren521 said...
Mar. 2, 2014 at 11:28 pm
This is amazing! Wow
 
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