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This dirt is so dry.
It might just make you high.
Ya gotta have a lot of water to make mud.
It's like your standing on crud.
Hard as Rock N' Roll
You can't even dig a hole.
Grass is as dead as a nail it makes you want to bail.



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1299836This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 11 at 2:09 am:
the rhyming scheme makes it playful, and the examples contribute to the running theme that the ground is really crappy. i like it!
 
Mr.packerbear12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 15 at 1:26 am :
Thanks for the comment:)   And whoever gave a 2 out of 5 rating, care to explain please?
 
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