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This dirt is so dry.
It might just make you high.
Ya gotta have a lot of water to make mud.
It's like your standing on crud.
Hard as Rock N' Roll
You can't even dig a hole.
Grass is as dead as a nail it makes you want to bail.



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Ray--yoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 8 at 8:43 am
I'm not really sure how dry soil can make one 'h.igh', sorry.
 
Mr.packerbear12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 8 at 11:05 pm
This isn't my best work, not even close. I literally was just trying to put words together, and I agree, I'm not sure how it could either lol.
 
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Jun. 11, 2014 at 2:09 am
the rhyming scheme makes it playful, and the examples contribute to the running theme that the ground is really crappy. i like it!
 
Mr.packerbear12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 15, 2014 at 1:26 am
Thanks for the comment:)   And whoever gave a 2 out of 5 rating, care to explain please?
 
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