Southern Ground

February 18, 2014
By Mr.packerbear12 SILVER, Minnesota Lake, Minnesota
Mr.packerbear12 SILVER, Minnesota Lake, Minnesota
5 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Judge lest not you be judged"

"Take the plank out of your own eye before the speck out of your brother's"

"live each day as if it's your last"

"God doesn't give you what you can handle, He helps you handle what you are given"


This dirt is so dry.
It might just make you high.
Ya gotta have a lot of water to make mud.
It's like your standing on crud.
Hard as Rock N' Roll
You can't even dig a hole.
Grass is as dead as a nail it makes you want to bail.


The author's comments:
I am not stealing work, I previously published this anonymously.

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on Jan. 8 2015 at 11:05 pm
Mr.packerbear12 SILVER, Minnesota Lake, Minnesota
5 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Judge lest not you be judged"

"Take the plank out of your own eye before the speck out of your brother's"

"live each day as if it's your last"

"God doesn't give you what you can handle, He helps you handle what you are given"

This isn't my best work, not even close. I literally was just trying to put words together, and I agree, I'm not sure how it could either lol.

on Jan. 8 2015 at 8:43 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

I'm not really sure how dry soil can make one 'h.igh', sorry.

on Jun. 15 2014 at 1:26 am
Mr.packerbear12 SILVER, Minnesota Lake, Minnesota
5 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Judge lest not you be judged"

"Take the plank out of your own eye before the speck out of your brother's"

"live each day as if it's your last"

"God doesn't give you what you can handle, He helps you handle what you are given"

Thanks for the comment:)   And whoever gave a 2 out of 5 rating, care to explain please?

1299836 said...
on Jun. 11 2014 at 2:09 am
1299836, 1299836, California
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the rhyming scheme makes it playful, and the examples contribute to the running theme that the ground is really crappy. i like it!


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