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Honey, come here.
That’s right, come here.
I wont hurt you honey.
I just want to help,
Tell me, what’s wrong?
Who made you cry?
Shush honey, don’t worry.
Come, shut your eyes.
Everything will be okay.
Everything will be just fine.
Come and listen to my lullaby.



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-Yin- said...
Feb. 6 at 8:28 pm
the title brings it to a full circle so i disagree
 
itskatomallThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 6 at 5:45 pm
I enjoyed this short piece. My favorite line was the last line bcause it rhymed with one of the previous lines and brought everything together. However, I would like to say that it wasn't quite clear to me if this was a mother consoling a daughter, or a boyfriend consoling a girlfriend, or anything of that sort. I wish that the poem told more of a story. Also, the title of the poem is lullaby, but a lullaby is only mentioned once. In my opinion, if you are going to title the poem "Lulla... (more »)
 
EpilepticUnicorn said...
Feb. 6 at 1:01 pm
Well written peice! Excellent job
 
briandbubbz said...
Feb. 6 at 9:03 am
u can cry on me
 
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