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I'm alone, it's just guideless me;
I don't belong to this crowded street,
To all the places where others fit;
Lost in silence, finding trails,
Once the voice you follow fails;
Can you hear all the screams,
People yell,
All the secrets never meant to tell;
Guilty tongues taken me to the wrong hemisphere,
I was different, lost again,
As never before, so far and so near;
I was dazzled, fallen down,
Mastered runaways,
Didn’t notice time,
Solely places change.



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Luv4EverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 10 at 8:53 pm
Omg I love your poems! Such a unique style with great messages!
 
ISeeTheStars said...
Feb. 5 at 5:16 pm
This was really nice! I enjoyed it a lot! Keep writing!
 
elycavillThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 16 at 3:15 pm
Thanks a lot!!
 
amk7997 said...
Feb. 2 at 7:39 pm
I like your use of imagery.  Usually listing seems to be draging on forever, but in this case it actually works because all the words harmonize to create a larger and more vivid picture. Nice work.
 
elycavillThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 16 at 3:14 pm
Thank you very much!!
 
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