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That Water Stuff

December 28, 2013
By BruceK GOLD, San Jose, California
BruceK GOLD, San Jose, California
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Rain.
Falling, a spectacle so graceful,
As the sky is
Grey.

Look up:
Close your eyes.

Breathe:
Inhale.
The scent of wetness filling your nostrils,
Coursing all the way through your lungs,
Circulating throughout your body.
Exhale.
The damp, cool breeze caressing your cheeks,
Seeing your breath escape as a misty vapor,
Today is a chilly day.

Listen:
The rain, falling in sheets.
Gentle.
Ever so gentle,
The droplets kissing the pavement.
Hear them.

Pitter


Patter



Drip




Drop





Rain.


The author's comments:
The experience. In words.

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BruceK GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2014 at 6:33 pm
BruceK GOLD, San Jose, California
10 articles 0 photos 4 comments
Thanks!! :)

itsana GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2014 at 1:24 pm
itsana GOLD, Plano, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"best way to save humanity is to turn the monsters against one another"~neil shusterman

I adore the rain and let me tell you this: you captured it so well <3 Beautiful poem