All Sounds Off MAG

October 12, 2008
By callielion BRONZE, Cottonwood, Arizona
callielion BRONZE, Cottonwood, Arizona
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i waited for that
small, electronic
lifeline kept inside
my pocket
to squirm
like a child
embarrassed by the
kisses his mother
forced upon his cheek.
letting me know
you missed me
at least a little.
even though i knew
i had left it
on silent.



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on Feb. 13 2014 at 11:11 am
SoldMySoulForLove BRONZE, Peoria, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"The worst kind of love is the one felt by only one person."

Very funny

yoitskody said...
on Oct. 4 2013 at 2:33 pm
i like how it is very creative and great!!

on Nov. 1 2012 at 3:02 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

This is very smart, creative, and powerful, good job! PLEASE make sure to read some of my poems too!!!!!

Mani2x SILVER said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 2:49 pm
Mani2x SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I was born an original, I'm not going to die a copy.

I freakin love this.! Keep up the good work.

on Dec. 18 2011 at 11:51 am
wenesday1234 BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
best freinds: you cry i cry you laugh i laugh you fight i fight you hurt i hurt you jump off a brige i get in a paddle boat an dsave you

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!

on Oct. 10 2011 at 7:54 am
CourteneyTOXICITY BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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Nice! Very great metaphor usage.

on Aug. 16 2011 at 5:13 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I've always been famous. It's just everybody's just now finding out." --Lady Gaga

I agree completely

. said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 10:18 pm
This is a great poem. A great metaphor and way of describing something so simple. It just goes to show you don't need lengthy descriptions and verses to make a poem sound sentimental. This is one of the most heartfelt poems I've heard in a long time and it was done so effortlessly.

MakaylaS. GOLD said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 9:20 pm
MakaylaS. GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Starve a Bully, Feed your Soul, STAND GRAND." -Vincent Castronovo

This describes me exactly, I can totally relate. I love the way that you put it together though, short and to the point. It's truly fantastic! <3

on Jun. 22 2011 at 9:08 pm
msoccerm345 SILVER, Grimes, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

i love this poem. i know every comment on here is probably saying that they can relate and i am going to say the same thing. i totally can. but i think there comes a time when you meet that special someone and you dont have to be told that they miss you but you just know because they love you and that will never go away. great piece of writing:)

Tedge95 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 10 2011 at 6:00 pm
Tedge95 BRONZE, Wooster, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
in the end everything will be okay, because if its not, its not the end - one of my good friends

man, i've been there, too many times, but its all worth it the one time it does vibrate. at least i hope it will be

Angel_17 said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 11:54 pm
Angel_17, Tucson, Arizona
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I can really relate to this. I think you spoke from the heart:)

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:22 pm
Writerzhand GOLD, Ball Ground, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
I wanna carry a piece of who I was before so when I hit the wall, I REALLY hit the wall.

I like the soul to it, it's not lengthy and get's right to the point. And it also expresses every emotion that someone has had at some point- the feeling that you want to be missed.

MRose911 GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 10:46 pm
MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"No boy is worth crying over and the one who is won't make you cry." - Sarah Kane

This poem is absolutely amazing! I do the same exact thing! Nowa days it seems like i was no point in even having one but i do at the same time! :P

on Nov. 14 2010 at 2:37 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

WOW. this is amazing! :) i absolutly love it and can relate to it! love love love it! thanks for posting! check out my work?

tankmurdof said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 12:02 pm
This poem tells a lot about peoples lives depending on them.

Kururu966 said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 11:59 am
The poem is great it feels like it tells ones life.

LindsayB GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2010 at 9:21 am
LindsayB GOLD, Aston, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't need to be brave every minute of everyday, just a few seconds at a time."

This was awesome. It's short, to the point, but I can totally relate to it.

Photo_97 said...
on Sep. 12 2010 at 12:45 pm
Photo_97, Ct., Connecticut
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awesome i LOVE IT! that was just....wow

 


on Aug. 27 2010 at 12:02 pm
meganwagner21 PLATINUM, Old Bridge, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes good things have to fall apart so better things can fall together." -Marilyn Monroe
"Nobody can go back and make a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending." -Maria Robinson

amazing ! one of my faves!


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