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The World Yesterday.

November 15, 2013
By PoeticStranger SILVER, Battle Creek, Michigan
PoeticStranger SILVER, Battle Creek, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity."
~Edgar Allan Poe


"I sit and think,
think of the beggars on the street.
Sitting there freezing, and in distress.
Holding cups to the rich,
cups that say, "Change."
Have you ever sat and thought,
maybe he doesn't want, "Change" for alcohol.

Change for drugs.
Change for thrills.
Change for crime.

But perhaps change in ways.

Change in values.
Change in society.
Change in rules.
Change in Government."


The author's comments:
I was thinking about society, and how the world is today.

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on Mar. 17 2014 at 7:59 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I think the message here is really great. And the way it is written is flawless. 5 stars for me (:

on Mar. 11 2014 at 12:00 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

I have never thought of it in this particular way! Amazing! Makes me think now! Awesome job!

on Feb. 3 2014 at 9:23 am
RoyalCorona SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 290 comments

Favorite Quote:
All of us fave failed to match our dream of perfection. I rate us on the basis of our splendid failure to do the impossible. -William Faulkner

I really liked this poem! I never thought about it that way! Great job!

Ahhni PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 18 2013 at 11:13 am
Ahhni PLATINUM, Battle Creek, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your naked body should only belong to those who fall in love with your naked soul."
- Charlie Chaplin

How incrediable Elijah Shine <3 I absolutely love this piece of yours. I can see all of your poems being published. You'll go far my love. I'm so proud of you darling <3

on Nov. 17 2013 at 4:05 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank

Wow, what a unique angle! You combatted existing stereotypes of the poor while making the word "change" into something more. I absolutely love it. I never thought of it from that perspective. That's the mark of a true poet. :D