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Hole in the shoe

Hole in the shoe
That never quiet fit in.
Filled with light,
Bordered by darkness.
Although He tried to weave in,
The missing thread.
The hole would always find a way,
To become full again.
Would always find a way,
To get that light back.
Stubborn little thing,
Was that hole in the shoe.




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411EllieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
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Wow! I absolutely love the metaphor! I never thought of moonphases that way! This is B.R.E.A.T.H.T.A.K.I.N.G.! Keep writing! ~Lexy
 
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