Somebody's Poem

Hold the frosts of winter,
Summer's gone away,
The snow's falling thick now,
And the little children play.

Myself, I'm being buried,
Drowning in powdery white,
But a smile plays upon my lips,
And you're on my mind tonight.

A green leaf falls from a tree,
Dying rotten as it sinks,
But it’s soon replaced by another,
With longevity complete.

And when I say that it is cold,
My thoughts can keep it away,
You spring from them like fountain gold
And calm the worst of the quays.

And I know that it’s a leery thing,
To be close to me,
To you I'm something all-to-new
But I think it'll be worth the sting.

So come a little bit closer,
With that smile to melt the ice,
I'll hold you close with a kiss amongst the fire,
All we've got to do is roll the dice.





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RoyalCorona said...
Jan. 13, 2014 at 4:13 pm
Wow! I really likes this one too! Great job!
 
Rayynbow said...
Nov. 11, 2013 at 5:54 pm
The imagery in this poem is amazing! The entire thing is clear in its purpose and the rhyme really adds to the message.
 
Ray--yoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 11, 2013 at 6:22 am
Of all the feedback for feedback options on the chat bar, i'm glad I chose yours , really great work! I love the simplicity and the rhyme. Keep it up!
 
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