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bubbles.
god’s just a little kid
with a big bottle
of Miracle Bubbles
and a wand
dipping, blowing these
bubbles
all doomed to

pop

at one point or another.
they either drop
too fast, before
he can catch them,
or the biggest ones
pop!
before they’ve even
been launched.
it’s the little ones
that leave quietly
and take their time

gently

drifting

down

everyone leaves a mark,
you know,
but sooner or later
they’ve all evaporated.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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red-i13 said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 7:18 pm:
This poem is incredible. It also makes me want to blow bubbles too.
 
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KrystalT said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 1:13 pm:
It is such a sweet poem. Now I want to go get some bubbles.
 
WindDancer replied...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 2:07 pm :
My thoughts exactly :)
 
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SilverBeam said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 1:10 pm:
This is absolutely brilliant!!! I would love to hear more of what you have to say, so please: enlighten me!!!
 
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MRose911 said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 12:18 am:
wow! this is absolutely amazing!! This is going to be my new metaphor on life! I love it! If you get a second, I would love to hear your opinion on some of my stuff
 
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bluegirl440 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 9:24 am:
This is absolutly fantastic! Created a very interesting picture in my mind.
 
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Uranium said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 9:05 pm:
The ability to simplify something beyond comprehension to mere childs play is brilliant
 
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NSaraiC said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 12:49 pm:
This was amazing. In all honesty, one of the best pieces of writing on this entire site.
 
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Aro_To_The_Heart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 9:42 am:
Simply...astonishing. I'd give you a 10 out of 5 for such a great piece of art. Such a wonderful thing to write. Absolutely lovely. Thank you.
 
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Lexi-pex said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 3:04 am:
that was really great! i  loved it! : )
 
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wefellinLAVA said...
Nov. 1, 2010 at 3:42 pm:
Lovely metaphor.
 
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sidneynicole said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 3:18 pm:
this was soo good,, like no lie
 
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Leo123 said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 3:15 pm:
I like that very much. It's true.
 
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GuitarGirl92851 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 12:16 pm:
Maybe we are bubbles, simply because we're supposed to move out of the way for more bubbles to come along. And what happens if you have to many bubbles? They all pop.
 
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The Littlest Hobo said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 10:54 am:
I completely agree about how you can drift down and just pop!
 
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Camps Kid #8 said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 9:12 am:
This piece was really understandable. It had good entries like "sooner or later they've all evaporated" and it was easy to follow.
 
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Emotions crave said...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 5:37 pm:
I love this its rly cute and i get what you are saying in it! :)
 
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LoveLikeWoe said...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 8:43 am:
Five stars. (:
 
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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 30, 2010 at 11:39 pm:

this is really good! i love the twist you used to get your point across.well done!

rate/comment on some of my work, too if you'd like!!:D

 
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gkswodls said...
Aug. 30, 2010 at 10:46 pm:
i would have never thought to connect this idea with bubbles.
 
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