A Last Love Story

October 7, 2013
You hear music.
A soft melody, a lullaby.
You hear laughter.
A happy, joyous sound.
You hear a crash.
A sudden, frightening sound.
You hear screaming.
A panicked, surprised screech.
You hear gunfire.
A bloody, horrifying moment.
You hear silence.
A final, eerie feeling.

You see blur.
A teary, foggy vision.
You see red.
Bloody evidence.
You see concrete.
A close, final glance.
You see him.
His still, blank eyes.
You see her.
A killer, gun in hand.
You see black.
A sight of the end.

You feel moisture.
A warm, thick puddle.
You feel pain.
A hole in your lower chest.
You feel sorrow.
A loss of love and hope for him.
You feel betrayal.
A loss of trust in her.
You feel tired.
A slipping, releasing act.
You feel nothing.
A last surrender.

With those last moments,
You hear music.
You see laughter.
You feel happy.

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headed_somewhereGirl said...
Oct. 9, 2013 at 12:21 pm
that was amazing! It created one of the most beautiful but saddest pictures I could imagine for this! Well done.
AnnaFofana said...
Oct. 9, 2013 at 10:30 am
that is amazing. i started to cry :( its really good keep writing 
sadesdd said...
Oct. 8, 2013 at 8:20 pm
I have no idea why anybody is not commenting on this!!!  It is awesome!!!!! So many describing words I would not think of, also, I love the style of this poem! Awesome work you got here:)
AmandaClair replied...
Oct. 9, 2013 at 10:27 am
I posted it three  days ago, thats why. :)
sadesdd replied...
Oct. 11, 2013 at 3:32 pm
well sorry! it is good!
AmandaClair replied...
Oct. 23, 2013 at 10:24 am
:) Thank you!!
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