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Freezing.

September 11, 2013
By maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc


Thoughts like ice pierce my soul
Threatening to swallow me whole

They come from to and fro
Where the go next no one knows


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Just a short poem

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on Nov. 15 2013 at 12:51 pm
The less words that are written, the more powerful something becomes. Short and simple, yet quite powerful and deep in meaning. I like when writers do this. Great job.

on Nov. 15 2013 at 12:48 pm
RozaAlexander, Amory, Mississippi
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rumors are carried by haters, spread by fools, & accepted by idiots.

i really like this, even with the small amount of lines, its really good  

on Sep. 21 2013 at 11:59 pm
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

thank you hannah it means a lot. really.

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Sep. 21 2013 at 11:57 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

This is a great poem thats very thorough in only a short amount of lines. Its beautiful, in an eerie sort of way, and I loved every word. It had to be read over and over again to get the overall essence of the poem, which was very intriguing. I loved it! Keep it up