Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > Freezing. Freezing. By maelstrom14, Oak Habor, WA More by this author Threatening to swallow me whole They come from to and fro Where the go next no one knows « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 4 comments. Post your own! Report abuse HornyUnicorn69 said... Nov. 15, 2013 at 12:51 pm: The less words that are written, the more powerful something becomes. Short and simple, yet quite powerful and deep in meaning. I like when writers do this. Great job. Report abuse RozaAlexander said... Nov. 15, 2013 at 12:48 pm: i really like this, even with the small amount of lines, its really good Report abuse Hanban12 said... Sept. 21, 2013 at 11:57 pm: This is a great poem thats very thorough in only a short amount of lines. Its beautiful, in an eerie sort of way, and I loved every word. It had to be read over and over again to get the overall essence of the poem, which was very intriguing. I loved it! Keep it up maelstrom14 replied... Sept. 21, 2013 at 11:59 pm : thank you hannah it means a lot. really.