September 11, 2013
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Thoughts like ice pierce my soul
Threatening to swallow me whole

They come from to and fro
Where the go next no one knows

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HornyUnicorn69 said...
Nov. 15, 2013 at 12:51 pm
The less words that are written, the more powerful something becomes. Short and simple, yet quite powerful and deep in meaning. I like when writers do this. Great job.
RozaAlexander said...
Nov. 15, 2013 at 12:48 pm
i really like this, even with the small amount of lines, its really good  
Hanban12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 21, 2013 at 11:57 pm
This is a great poem thats very thorough in only a short amount of lines. Its beautiful, in an eerie sort of way, and I loved every word. It had to be read over and over again to get the overall essence of the poem, which was very intriguing. I loved it! Keep it up
maelstrom14 replied...
Sept. 21, 2013 at 11:59 pm
thank you hannah it means a lot. really.
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