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August 15, 2013
By Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The man who takes offense when offence is not intended is a fool
However the man who takes offence when it is intended is an even greater fool"
Ralph Waldo Emerson


Fears
Seem to hide
A Shy Romantic writing poems
My mask so perfect it replaces my
Face


The author's comments:
I was overwhelmed when first writing this poem by the fact that my thoughts are only heard in my poems

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on Oct. 19 2013 at 6:21 pm
Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The man who takes offense when offence is not intended is a fool
However the man who takes offence when it is intended is an even greater fool"
Ralph Waldo Emerson

Thank you for your feed back, I was writing after failing to be brave after making myself a prommise i always beak, "my thoughts hide in broken dreams.  I can barely read them! " 

on Sep. 15 2013 at 2:56 pm
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
“Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.”

― Mary Oliver

:/ it didn't post right. but you can read it line for line, I'm sure.  

on Sep. 15 2013 at 2:55 pm
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
70 articles 5 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.”

― Mary Oliver

lol, I'll be creative and write a response in poem form! this also reminds me a poem I read in the magazine, where they wrote, "You wear a new face, and see the world, as decayed as it was." Technically, using your hand as your voice is not the worst thing people can do. I know I'm one of those people, and everyone is flabergasted that my writing comes from little quiet me! :) keep on writing great poems! "you wear a new face" i wear this mask like devils in a pair of angel  eyes, it's who i am  


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