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Love Me, Love Me Not

Burning,
In the back of my mind,
Forever,
Tattooed on my heart,
Engraved,
In my skin,
Your love,
Leaving me breathless,
Amazed,
By your perfection,
Confused,
By your kindness,
Blinded,
By the light you shine into my life,
Frozen,
With the fear of losing you forever,
Distracted,
By the happiness,
The love,
Or what I thought was love,
Haunted,
By the unforgettable memories,
Forever,
You will be in my heart,
Love me,
Love me not,
But I will always love you.



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MissExplorationThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 5 at 8:38 pm:
Great poem! In every other line you used one word and added more to it. It made it feel intense.
 
SamanthaWThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 12:51 pm :
Thanks! :) That's good to hear, because I was going for intense :P 
 
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Ingolden said...
Aug. 3 at 2:27 pm:
deep fellings 
great work! :)
 
SamanthaWThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 5 at 8:30 am :
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback :)
 
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