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I have a secret.
A secret that runs inside my mind,
setting it into daydreaming,
and, like a coffee,
is what keeps me awake every night.
A secret that pumps
together with the blood in my heart,
making it beats fast,
and, like a coffee,
is what makes me nervous
every time you speak with me.
A secret that gives
rhythm to my laughter
leading it to singing of songs,
and, like a coffee,
is what keeps me warm
every cold hour of waiting for you.
My secret is you.
My secret coffee.



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WriteOrWrongThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 8:07 pm:
I was automatically intrigued by the title. I love the idea of this poem but I feel the actual poem may benefit from better flow, and less explicit lines. Wonderful comparisons to coffee, that part was beautiful. I just think a bit of remodeling would do wonders for such a curious poem. Keep it up!
 
writefearlessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 12:51 pm :
thank you so much, especially for the advice. i would try to improve it :)
 
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