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Flowers bloom bright and soft
Delicate as a blade of grass
As soft as a baby lamb
You seem them bloom and grow
Wait for them to go
And when they stay you say
"thank you"

For you have spared them from heartbreak
They stayed through the storms
They stayed through sickness
With there beauty and soft touch
As they whisper to you in the wind
"I'll stay"



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Renda.AndersonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 9 at 12:00 pm
Writingbee this is a really good poem! The message and imagry is amazing. Keep writing! :)
 
Uga10 said...
Jun. 29 at 10:55 am
I think this is great, great detail and description. Check out mine if you want thanks!
 
TheCometThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 24 at 3:47 pm
Very beautiful! I love how you picture life as a flower's lifetime and beauty. Great Job :P
 
BeYou replied...
Jun. 24 at 10:39 pm
Thank you! That means a lot!
 
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