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daddy promised
if i held his hand
that we could fly together,
and draw a sky picture
for a missing mommy
who had flown away.
that we could map
a path for her to follow
to find me.
i took his hand
to find
that when we flew,
my pictures
were swallowed
by storm clouds.
angry tears dropped
as did a handhold.
when i landed,
i landed alone.
no map could find me.



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poeticlove143 said...
Dec. 17, 2013 at 12:23 pm
The fat that it is simple it shows how you naturally feel about something
 
Sundance This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 20, 2013 at 7:03 am
Thank you for your comment! I like to experiment with simple forms of poetry, because I think that they convey a lot.
 
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