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Frozen flecks pierce and pick
Ice with intricate designs,
Cool and fresh,
Swirls and spirals,
Sustained only in flight,
Melting instantaneously
When touched by rays of light,
Trickled own a frozen branch
Drops and shatters quickly,
Warmth thaws a world of ice
Water takes its place,
No longer silent
Instead a drumming beat,
Carve out the valleys
Leave its name behind,
Extinguish strong perfumes
Emanating from flower beds,
Leave a temporary trace,
Cleanse the world of sorrow,
Sadness,
And
Stress,
Replace it with happiness,
Build a bubbling rainbow,
Never a consistent plan,
Unexpected,
But predictable,
A sudden freeze,
The ice returns,
The sorrow is sustained,
To be met by sunlight once again



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izzyjobe29 said...
May 10 at 10:28 am:
I really like this poem! Everything is described so well and it feels like you're really there.
 
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GBenOct8This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 1 at 8:07 pm:
I love this poem. It seems to come alive.
 
emily replied...
May 10 at 10:28 am :
This is an AMAZING poem!!!! It really speaks to me. I love it!!!
 
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