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Outside the snowflakes float and fall
like dancers turning to a silent song
they fall like a thousand spots of light
in the black ink that is the night.
If i were a hawk i might hear them softly hit the ground
the cold floor of the world
if not for that harsh floor they might fall forever.
Do you ever dream of falling through an endless night?
Not the heavy fall of the corrupt and the proud
but gently falling until the ground,
the quite, soft and innocent drifting
subject only to the wind lifting
and drifting you through an endless and glorious night.



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StarGazer9This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 2 at 3:49 pm:
Very calming and peaceful, i loved it! Keep up the good work.
 
OurVoicesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 11:55 am :
i know this is a late reply, but thank you very much!
 
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