Tenderness of her Body

April 7, 2013
By romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
love is like a rose, it has many colors & sights of beauty in spite of having thorns


I try to realize,
Where the tenderness of love was discovered,
As I felt this tenderness 1st in this body,


When I kissed my lover's lips
The moment was majestic,

Her eyes were truly romantic with red
I wanted to feel it again,

Though kept it for tomorrow
Cause I saw my lover,


Still intensely immersed in a new tenderness
Its hard to explain, but so easy to sustain
I was in a deep agony,


As I wanted to have it again
I didn’t say about it to my soul mate

Knowing then a deep shyness she will strongly restrain
This the 1st part of love,


You can see the shyness above
Then tomorrow comes, we kissed then again
I felt a new deep tenderness,


I realized this is called romance
I don’t know I fell in this substance,
As the feelings are different & im absorbed in the tenderness

The effect is love, love never cant be enough


The author's comments:
its a sweet romantic poem

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on Jun. 25 2013 at 2:21 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Hi there :) that was a sweet poem :) your usage of '1st' instead of first made the poem a bit awkward. The meaning is still the same but it's visually out of place in the poem.

MMOON PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2013 at 2:09 am
MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Sop being afriad of what could go wrong. Start being positive about what could go right"
I also have another "Loving someone is like hugging a cactus. The harder you hold the more it hurts"

Beautiful. I really enjoyed it. Keep writing!  

on Apr. 19 2013 at 1:25 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”
― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You'll Go!

A very nice one. Though you have some grammatical mistakes that trip it up. Smooth those over, and it will enhance the poem. I like how the tenderness doesn't end up really being her body but your connection to her- how you care for her. Good job.

Phoenix. said...
on Apr. 16 2013 at 4:52 am
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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I like how much feeling you put in this poem i think you did a great job! :)

on Apr. 15 2013 at 1:10 pm
LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
The beautiful thing about writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. ~Robert Cormier

Really mushy XD I like it! :)

on Apr. 15 2013 at 11:21 am
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

i luv keep writing like :)


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