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His smooth hands
Find their way to hers.
Holding,
Calming,
Easing.
Gentle yet rough,
Soothing yet strong.
They waited in the shadows,
Until she provided light.

She says he can
Transform the world
With just one flick
Of his wrist.
With those loving hands,
He held her heart
And laced it
With his.



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LiraDaeris said...
Apr. 23, 2013 at 12:08 am
Kyuuuutteeee
 
Alex_Writer said...
Apr. 16, 2013 at 8:57 am
WOW.  When I read your poems I wonder how you can do it, how you can pick out the right words and make it flow perfectly.  Keep up the good work!
 
Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 12:16 pm
Thanks so much! :)
 
FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 4:47 pm
I agree i can feel the emotions and its amazing like always you are gonna go far i can see that clearly
 
Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 12:16 pm
Thanks u soooooooooo much! :) U r too
 
YellowRose79 said...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 4:41 pm
It manages to tell a story in just a few lines. Awesome! :)
 
7_Ambitions said...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 1:13 pm
Amazing poem , i love the flow , and structure
 
ZaZaGoober said...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 4:18 pm
I think this poem is beautifully written and I wish it were longer. Keepp up the great work!
 
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