I Will Wait

April 2, 2013
By PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
12 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"there are 2 types of writer's: one that makes you think and one that makes you wonder"Brian Aldiss
"Some things i cannot change but til i try i'll never know" Wicked the musical


AND I WILL SIT AND WAIT
IN THE GRASS THE HORSES ATE
FOR THE RAIN TO COME
NOT SURE WHERE FROM
TO FALL FROM ABOVE
AND I WILL WAIT FOR MY LOVE
ARE YOU STILL TRUE?
WHERE ARE YOU?
THE WONDER EXPANDS
AS I HOLD OUT MY HANDS
SINCE I DONT KNOW WHERE YOU ARE
I'LL JUST CATCH A FALLING STAR


The author's comments:
Have you ever thought that the person that you may marry is out there right now? When will you see them? I can wait

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on Feb. 4 at 12:53 pm
BookWerm SILVER, Orem, Utah
8 articles 4 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hello, boys." - Crowley, Supernatural

I love this poem. It's sounds so good when sung too. I can relate to it, as I've never had a crush and I'm not sure that I'll ever find love, but I have to keep remembering that I have a whole life and a world full of peopleleft.

PiperBloo GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2013 at 3:59 pm
PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
12 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"there are 2 types of writer's: one that makes you think and one that makes you wonder"Brian Aldiss
"Some things i cannot change but til i try i'll never know" Wicked the musical

thank you all so much for the feedback! sorry it's capitalized...not sure why that happened

on Apr. 6 2013 at 6:58 pm
I really like the idea of your poem, not know where your true love is... but remembering they are out there. Really good work though maybe I would add a little onto it to make it more indepth. Really sweet  though :)

on Apr. 5 2013 at 10:16 pm
CassandraD BRONZE, San Jose, California
2 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Living is a book you can't close. Until your Days are over and the last lines of your story are THE END..."
- written by me.

I liked it. The ending made me think a little (because to me it seemed a bit random). 

on Apr. 5 2013 at 4:10 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Describe yourself in three words."
"Lazy."

It's a really nice poem!!! =)

Maldivian said...
on Apr. 5 2013 at 3:37 pm
Maldivian, Fuvahmulak, New York
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its great as i dont even talk    

on Apr. 5 2013 at 3:11 pm
Tabitha1233 PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 6 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
I would rather live my life as if there is a God and die to find out there isn't, than live my life as if there isn't and die to find out there is. Albert Camus

Wow! Very inspiring! Love it!

on Apr. 5 2013 at 2:57 pm
Thecurseofdestiel SILVER, Denton, North Carolina
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Wow.... I love it!!!


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