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AND I WILL SIT AND WAIT
IN THE GRASS THE HORSES ATE
FOR THE RAIN TO COME
NOT SURE WHERE FROM
TO FALL FROM ABOVE
AND I WILL WAIT FOR MY LOVE
ARE YOU STILL TRUE?
WHERE ARE YOU?
THE WONDER EXPANDS
AS I HOLD OUT MY HANDS
SINCE I DONT KNOW WHERE YOU ARE
I'LL JUST CATCH A FALLING STAR



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WickedWriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:59 pm:
thank you all so much for the feedback! sorry it's capitalized...not sure why that happened
 
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ForeverDreaming said...
Apr. 6 at 6:58 pm:
I really like the idea of your poem, not know where your true love is... but remembering they are out there. Really good work though maybe I would add a little onto it to make it more indepth. Really sweet  though :)
 
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CassandraDThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 5 at 10:16 pm:
I liked it. The ending made me think a little (because to me it seemed a bit random). 
 
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Elisa39 said...
Apr. 5 at 4:10 pm:
It's a really nice poem!!! =)
 
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chubbyboy said...
Apr. 5 at 3:37 pm:
its great as i dont even talk    
 
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Tabitha1233This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 5 at 3:11 pm:
Wow! Very inspiring! Love it!
 
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RainForMe said...
Apr. 5 at 2:57 pm:
Wow.... I love it!!!
 
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