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You are away not knowing that,
With sorrow, my heart has to fight.
You are gone not knowing that,
I am suffering day and night.

And if you return by a chance,
I'll be blissful as lustrous light.
For whenever you are with me,
Even stars shine with all their might.

For decision, I've left it all to fate,
Whether our story concludes love or hate.




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Janelle7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
today at 3:12 pm:
Wow! i truly enjoyed this and totally can relate to it! Beautiful poem....i can't even express how amazing it is!
 
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lilredd7 said...
Oct. 19, 2013 at 9:10 am:
Great, I really wanted you to keep going but in that short time you got yourpoint across
 
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SuNshiNe007 said...
Apr. 30, 2013 at 11:52 am:
Wow I LOVE this Hamza!! :D Great job! It is sad though but dont lose hope there is more than one person out there if this is true. ;) I am always here for you too. ~Sunny~
 
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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 24, 2013 at 2:19 pm:
You have a very interesting way with words, it's haunting ;) I've loved all ur works so far, but this ones my fav...in fact I'm favoriting it now! XD
 
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joejinny said...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 3:33 am:
loved it.really wonderful  
 
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UsamaAhmed said...
Apr. 17, 2013 at 12:53 pm:
THis made me cry.... we share the same title ..
 
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SonzaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 14, 2013 at 2:14 pm:
short n sweet!!!
 
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AbbaDabbaDooThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 12, 2013 at 7:44 am:
A wonderful piece. I trully enjoyed the feel and moral to this.
 
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BlurAngelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 11, 2013 at 5:30 am:
Good rythm.. good message, really A M A Z I N G..  
 
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SongBird04 said...
Apr. 9, 2013 at 1:28 am:
I love this one! I like how you make your poems simple but deep. Good job :)
 
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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 7, 2013 at 10:38 am:
Aw, great poem! The rhythm is great and everything flows really well. Keep writing!
 
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KayleneB said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 1:00 pm:
Your poems all have a good rhythm to them I really like this one
 
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FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 3:03 pm:
It's really good i got confused a little on what it was about then i read it again and i slaped myself for being stupid i like the flow
 
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moet14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 4:36 am:
Great poem I love it  
 
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Zee.100 said...
Mar. 30, 2013 at 7:06 am:
Thats really good, youv got great talent man.
 
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Ashes3lol said...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 11:40 pm:
I really liked it, and the word lusterious popped out to me most :)
 
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LariElaine said...
Mar. 27, 2013 at 1:08 am:
that is soooo good! good job!
 
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Sunny225LuvstheWorldThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 26, 2013 at 11:49 pm:
I LOVE IT SUCH COMPASSION
 
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