You and Me

March 21, 2013
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein


You are away not knowing that,
With sorrow, my heart has to fight.
You are gone not knowing that,
I am suffering day and night.

And if you return by a chance,
I'll be blissful as lustrous light.
For whenever you are with me,
Even stars shine with all their might.

For decision, I've left it all to fate,
Whether our story concludes love or hate.



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on Feb. 28 2014 at 3:12 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Wow! i truly enjoyed this and totally can relate to it! Beautiful poem....i can't even express how amazing it is!

lilredd7 said...
on Oct. 19 2013 at 9:10 am
Great, I really wanted you to keep going but in that short time you got yourpoint across

on Apr. 30 2013 at 11:52 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow I LOVE this Hamza!! :D Great job! It is sad though but dont lose hope there is more than one person out there if this is true. ;) I am always here for you too. ~Sunny~

on Apr. 24 2013 at 2:19 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

You have a very interesting way with words, it's haunting ;) I've loved all ur works so far, but this ones my fav...in fact I'm favoriting it now! XD

on Apr. 18 2013 at 3:33 am
joejinny BRONZE, Kerala, Other
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
credibility is like virginity once you lose it you can never get it back

loved it.really wonderful  

on Apr. 17 2013 at 12:53 pm
UsamaAhmed BRONZE, Lahore, Other
3 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's Better To Live A Day Like A Lion Than A Thousand Years Like A Jackal . (Tipu Sultan)

THis made me cry.... we share the same title ..

Sonza SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2013 at 2:14 pm
Sonza SILVER, Bhubaneswar, Other
5 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
An apple a day, if well aimed, keeps the doctor away. - P. G. Wodehouse

short n sweet!!!

on Apr. 12 2013 at 7:44 am
AbbaDabbaDoo PLATINUM, Mountain Grove, Missouri
43 articles 6 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some folks are wise and some are otherwise. I guess we know which one you are.

A wonderful piece. I trully enjoyed the feel and moral to this.

BlurAngel GOLD said...
on Apr. 11 2013 at 5:30 am
BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
16 articles 16 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is an Emotion of strong Affection and Personal Attachment.....

Good rythm.. good message, really A M A Z I N G..  

SongBird04 said...
on Apr. 9 2013 at 1:28 am
SongBird04, Littleton, Colorado
0 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
You've gotta take the good with the bad, smile when you're sad, love what you got and remember what you had. Always forgive but never forget, learn from your mistakes but never regret. People change and things go wrong but always remember life goes on

I love this one! I like how you make your poems simple but deep. Good job :)

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 10:38 am
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Aw, great poem! The rhythm is great and everything flows really well. Keep writing!

on Apr. 4 2013 at 1:00 pm
KayleneB BRONZE, Oakfield, New York
2 articles 4 photos 23 comments
Your poems all have a good rhythm to them I really like this one

on Apr. 1 2013 at 3:03 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

It's really good i got confused a little on what it was about then i read it again and i slaped myself for being stupid i like the flow

on Mar. 31 2013 at 4:36 am
iimoeloveii GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
IF YOU CAN'T HANG THEN THERE'S THE DOOR-SLEEPING WITH SIRENS

Great poem I love it  

ZainabS SILVER said...
on Mar. 30 2013 at 7:06 am
ZainabS SILVER, Karachi, Other
5 articles 3 photos 14 comments
Thats really good, youv got great talent man.

on Mar. 29 2013 at 11:40 pm
Ashes3lol SILVER, Columbus, Montana
6 articles 5 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return.

I really liked it, and the word lusterious popped out to me most :)

on Mar. 27 2013 at 1:08 am
larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
7 articles 0 photos 44 comments
that is soooo good! good job!

on Mar. 26 2013 at 11:49 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

I LOVE IT SUCH COMPASSION




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