Skydreamer

March 1, 2013
By EnnaGirl SILVER, Sacramento, California
EnnaGirl SILVER, Sacramento, California
9 articles 2 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be the change you want to see in the world
- Ghandi


Puffy white clouds drifted across the sky
I watched them
Staring until my eyes close
My hands curl around pockets in the soft moss
I breathed in the scent of pine trees
Opening my eyes, a dark shadow covers me
The trees looming overhead
Bright rays of light stream through the cracks in the large oak’s canopy
Blinding me in a paralyzing moment of beauty
White tufts form swirls of patterns
They dance until my eyes can see no more
A wave of darkness like a blanket
Wraps around my shoulders
And the Skydreamer
Watches gleaming lights twinkle until her dreams succumb
And she sinks into the ground
Her dreams carrying her to another world
Another place
That I cant even imagine



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on May. 2 2013 at 10:45 pm
SleepingDragon58, Groose Pointe, Michigan
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I love the imagery in this piece

on May. 2 2013 at 11:08 am
danielsock BRONZE, Wautoma, Wisconsin
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i think this is really good keep up your work

on Apr. 29 2013 at 10:13 pm
PoetLaureate274 PLATINUM, Manitowoc, Wisconsin
20 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have not even begun to scratch the surface of how important your life means to not only me, [y]our friends and [y]our family, but your life, which is a gift for the world that is waiting for you." - Brent Smith.

holy crap.  this poem is beautiful in every way. the descriptive terms are genius, the imagery is sound and solid, the poem flows unlike so many other freeverse poems on here, and the poem contains just enough of fantasy and allure to make the reader ponder on it for hours if not days to come if they so choose. 5 million/5

on Apr. 29 2013 at 6:36 am
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

good really imigationtive :3

on Apr. 28 2013 at 11:43 pm
PriyaModi BRONZE, Indore, Other
1 article 7 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
I like the way i am,need no transformation,,,LOVE LIFE.

Good job!And nice thought.

on Apr. 6 2013 at 8:27 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
27 articles 0 photos 426 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

Beautiful poem, I can imagine myself there.  I've said this about everything else of yours I've read, but still, this is awesome :)

on Mar. 17 2013 at 11:35 pm
KwizzleC BRONZE, Ottawa, Other
3 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on. - Robert Frost

i really liked it, especially your choice of words.  (:

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 17 2013 at 7:02 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 527 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

Wow, this is great! Its so discriptive, just incredible, keep writting! :)




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