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Lost...

March 9, 2013
By x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star


I have looked through every crevasse
every crack in the ground
trying to find it hoping its safe and sound
looking for it, I wanna find
it is nowhere i have lost my mind

I have spoke my last word i don't no what to say
I'm trying to catch it but its running away
please help me find it,show me a sigh
it is no where I have lost my mind


The author's comments:
my sanity is no more

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GreyGirl ELITE said...
on May. 4 2013 at 2:34 am
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 392 comments
Beautiful. A few mistakes, though.

x_rbdf GOLD said...
on May. 2 2013 at 5:51 pm
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

Thanks for the help,But you didnt say if u liked it or not ?

on May. 1 2013 at 11:59 pm
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”
― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You'll Go!

Corrections: Crevice Have Spoken Sign I have spoken my last word. Or ; or - It is nowhere- I've lost my mind

x_rbdf GOLD said...
on Mar. 22 2013 at 8:16 pm
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

thanks so much    

x_rbdf GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2013 at 1:35 am
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

Thanks so much!!!! view more of my work  

samsam said...
on Mar. 16 2013 at 1:30 am
beautiful loved every part of it keep writing :)    

director said...
on Mar. 16 2013 at 12:43 am
The best I have read yet!!!!!! the dynamics are beautiful and I can really connect with it !!!!!! 500 stars !!!!!!!

on Mar. 15 2013 at 10:58 pm
theatregirl PLATINUM, Lathrup Village, Michigan
30 articles 12 photos 212 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To thine own self be true," -from Hamlet, a play by Shakespeare.
"I have sworn on the altar of god eternal hostility against all forms of tyranny over the mind of man." - Thomas Jefferson

I love it, it had perfect rhythm and structure. I loves this, keep writing.

on Mar. 15 2013 at 10:42 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

I like the vibe I got from this. It seems connected to the theme of the poem, the idea of insanity taking the place of sanity, of reality. I can completely understand where you are coming from, too. It is truly frightening when you start to question your own grasp on reality. I love this and love how relatable it is. Please keep it up; the powerful emotions you feel will get you far in writing.

Dizzily1997 said...
on Mar. 15 2013 at 9:17 pm
Dizzily1997, Odessa, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And in that moment, I swear, we were infinite."
-Perks of being a wallflower;Charlie

It's in depth and beautiful, a few grammar errors but none the less...beauthiful :)

on Mar. 15 2013 at 1:08 am
pulledheartstring, San Jose, California
0 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong. -- Mahatma Gandhi

There are a couple grammar mistakes that can easily be fixed, but overall I do like the idea of it. :)


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