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Dead Alive

March 8, 2013
By Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not follow those who follow others for they are only followers themselves.


Even as i was born i was dead alive,
thoughts here but my soul has gone,
somehow on birth i lost that bond,
those that most would be quite fond,
whoever has my soul i guess there a con,
because im no godfather no comparison to the don, the only thing i have are fights i have won,
battles to become the greatest son,
now in the end i feel like the only one,
family is nothing of interest,
friends have many points to confess,
i have a secret i prive,
a thirst for blood i thrive,
my secret is that i am deed alive.


The author's comments:
i just thought i should make something a little creative tell me what you think.

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on Mar. 14 2013 at 7:43 am
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not follow those who follow others for they are only followers themselves.

lol man thanks alot and i really will try to get me a novel started

on Mar. 13 2013 at 11:49 am
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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I never would have thought about this before, interesting. Maybe you should write a novel.... I like the picture you picked as well.

on Mar. 12 2013 at 8:03 am
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not follow those who follow others for they are only followers themselves.

thx peeps

on Mar. 12 2013 at 8:02 am
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not follow those who follow others for they are only followers themselves.

lol thanks alot i really think its great you guys enjoy my work so much

on Mar. 11 2013 at 6:52 pm
emi_is_fab SILVER, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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I like it a lot 

on Mar. 11 2013 at 6:36 pm
sydneylouise_101 BRONZE, Oak Forest, Illinois
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this is super creative and very fun to read and say outloud. My sister an di have been sitting here reading and rapping it!

on Mar. 11 2013 at 1:05 pm
Francis.R BRONZE, Elwood, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
" Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain"

I love your poem.....

on Mar. 11 2013 at 12:54 pm
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not follow those who follow others for they are only followers themselves.

thank you very much and ill have to think on that novel and it is kinda of a rap

on Mar. 10 2013 at 11:55 pm
Rebel21 PLATINUM, St. Catharines, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where there is desire, there is gonna be a flame,
Where there is a flame someone's bound to get burned.
Just because it burns doesn't mean you're gonna die,
You've got to get up and try.

I love this creativity and would have never thought of this idea. It sounds kind of like a rap when you read it out loud I love it! It sounds like an incredible storyline for a novel?!? If you write it I will read it! Amazing creativity love it!


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