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I have been thinking of you,
And the way you make me feel.
I'm getting scared now
Cause these feelings are so real,
I've always felt it,
But it's never been this deep
I can't go down now
I've got to stay strong
When my eyes are on you
It's so hard to look away.
When its time too leave you
I always want to stay.
I want to tell you
What's running through my head
But for now I'll just keep it to myself instead,
Cause I want nothing to jeopardize
The friendship that we have,
And I don't want to be left
Heartbroken and in tears.
I want you to know how I feel,
And that I mean it, I just want to scream it, its so real.
These words have been bottled up inside forever.
They explain the feelings I'm hiding,
And all the failed times I've tried.
I don't know if I can keep this in much longer
I'm thinking of ways, but I
don't know where to begin.
So confused,
I Don't know what to do,
I'll just let it be, wait and see,
It will happen if it's meant to be.
I have your friendship,
But I really want you.
This is killing me;
I don't know what to do
I just want to be with you,
I'll make you happy and watch you smile.
Even though sometimes I cant see you for a while, I still see you in my heart.
Its only cause my desires can't be filled.
It's hard to know you're with someone else
When all I want is you to be with me,
I want to show you what we could be;
I don't want to tell you
I want you to just open your eyes and see.
I want you to feel it too,
The feelings I feel,
I really want to show them,
These are so real.
But I can't,
I probably never will because
That are locked away.
They are waiting to be free,
drowning my heart in misery.



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Sammy_Rose said...
Dec. 9, 2013 at 10:14 pm
Very good! So raw and emotional, it was very deep.
 
Whitehouse503 said...
Apr. 28, 2013 at 4:57 pm
really great, i loved it :)
 
KayleneB said...
Apr. 26, 2013 at 3:12 pm
Thank you very much
 
mnm08 said...
Apr. 25, 2013 at 8:14 pm
Wow, that was really nice , great job :) i loved the atmosphere it created. 
 
MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 3:09 pm
Love the emotion. It's a very genuine peice. I like it a lot like a lot a lot. Well done.
 
FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 3:03 pm
this is rlly good :3 keep it up
 
BorderlineGenius777 said...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 8:49 pm
I am in a similar predicament. this is wonderful, keep it up.
 
FieryAngel said...
Mar. 17, 2013 at 1:51 am
wow this is rlly good
 
KayleneB replied...
Mar. 17, 2013 at 11:00 am
Thank you!
 
KayleneB said...
Mar. 8, 2013 at 10:27 pm
I really like this it reminds me alot of what I do Continue writing because your good at it Please return the favor and comment and rate mine TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/531223/Thinking-of-You/
 
CTS207 said...
Mar. 8, 2013 at 10:23 pm
Very personal and emotional, the line "That are locked away." shouldn't it be "They are locked away"? beyond that not bad.
 
KayleneB replied...
Mar. 8, 2013 at 10:29 pm
Yes my bad... Thanks for pointing that out
 
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