Thinking of You

February 22, 2013
By KayleneB BRONZE, Oakfield, New York
KayleneB BRONZE, Oakfield, New York
2 articles 4 photos 23 comments

I have been thinking of you,
And the way you make me feel.
I'm getting scared now
Cause these feelings are so real,
I've always felt it,
But it's never been this deep
I can't go down now
I've got to stay strong
When my eyes are on you
It's so hard to look away.
When its time too leave you
I always want to stay.
I want to tell you
What's running through my head
But for now I'll just keep it to myself instead,
Cause I want nothing to jeopardize
The friendship that we have,
And I don't want to be left
Heartbroken and in tears.
I want you to know how I feel,
And that I mean it, I just want to scream it, its so real.
These words have been bottled up inside forever.
They explain the feelings I'm hiding,
And all the failed times I've tried.
I don't know if I can keep this in much longer
I'm thinking of ways, but I
don't know where to begin.
So confused,
I Don't know what to do,
I'll just let it be, wait and see,
It will happen if it's meant to be.
I have your friendship,
But I really want you.
This is killing me;
I don't know what to do
I just want to be with you,
I'll make you happy and watch you smile.
Even though sometimes I cant see you for a while, I still see you in my heart.
Its only cause my desires can't be filled.
It's hard to know you're with someone else
When all I want is you to be with me,
I want to show you what we could be;
I don't want to tell you
I want you to just open your eyes and see.
I want you to feel it too,
The feelings I feel,
I really want to show them,
These are so real.
But I can't,
I probably never will because
That are locked away.
They are waiting to be free,
drowning my heart in misery.

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This article has 13 comments.

HammadWaseem said...
on Feb. 3 2015 at 1:27 pm
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.

You can't see me
-John Cena

Ooh, somebody stop me!

Its nice @KayleneB Will you rate and comment on my video?

on Dec. 9 2013 at 10:14 pm
Sammy_Rose BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Age is mind over matter.If you dont mind, it doesnt matter" ~Mark twain

Life is either a daring adventure or nothing.
Helen Keller

And even on the darkest of nights, the stars still shine bright.

Very good! So raw and emotional, it was very deep.

on Apr. 28 2013 at 4:57 pm
Whitehouse503 SILVER, North Waterboro, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"In the end you should always do the right thing, even if it's hard."

really great, i loved it :)

on Apr. 26 2013 at 3:12 pm
KayleneB BRONZE, Oakfield, New York
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Thank you very much

mnm08 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 25 2013 at 8:14 pm
mnm08 BRONZE, Grande Prairie, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer needs the industry of an ant, the creativity of a kitten and the hid of an armadillo."- Author Unknown

Wow, that was really nice , great job :) i loved the atmosphere it created. 

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 4 2013 at 3:09 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Love the emotion. It's a very genuine peice. I like it a lot like a lot a lot. Well done.

on Apr. 4 2013 at 3:03 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

this is rlly good :3 keep it up

on Mar. 29 2013 at 8:49 pm
BorderlineGenius777 SILVER, Lewiston, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"If all our misfortunes were laid in one common heap, whence everyone must take an equal portion, most would be content to take their own and depart."- Socrates

I am in a similar predicament. this is wonderful, keep it up.

on Mar. 17 2013 at 11:00 am
KayleneB BRONZE, Oakfield, New York
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Thank you!

KrisNoe GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2013 at 1:51 am
KrisNoe GOLD, Mayfield, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
Don't pay no mind to the demons. They fill you with fear.
- Phillip Phillips

wow this is rlly good

on Mar. 8 2013 at 10:29 pm
KayleneB BRONZE, Oakfield, New York
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Yes my bad... Thanks for pointing that out

on Mar. 8 2013 at 10:27 pm
KayleneB BRONZE, Oakfield, New York
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I really like this it reminds me alot of what I do Continue writing because your good at it Please return the favor and comment and rate mine

on Mar. 8 2013 at 10:23 pm
HouseofYork GOLD, Powhatan, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"...Time and Chance happened to them all." Ecc 9:11

Very personal and emotional, the line "That are locked away." shouldn't it be "They are locked away"? beyond that not bad.


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