In My Eyes

February 22, 2013

When I look up at the sky
At the fog filled clouds
The gray in everything comes out
While you see blue,
I see dark
Darkness that you never could
So let me be
Set me off in my dark dreams
My gray eternity
My reality that isn't real
The world that could never be
This is how I see



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on May. 22 2013 at 7:43 am
fakesmilesbigdreams PLATINUM, Rome, New York
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Thank you :)

on May. 22 2013 at 7:41 am
fakesmilesbigdreams PLATINUM, Rome, New York
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Thank you!

on Apr. 10 2013 at 2:47 pm
-Hopeless- GOLD, Hudson, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"The lines that have no rhyme, are the ones that mean the most" -Me-

"Are you with me, or will you fall to your knees?" - We came as romans-

Not big on free verse, but I like it :)

on Apr. 10 2013 at 2:24 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

Great poem!  The only thing I could suggest is more diverse word choice, but other than that the flow and voice of this poem are outstanding!


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