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In My Eyes

When I look up at the sky
At the fog filled clouds
The gray in everything comes out
While you see blue,
I see dark
Darkness that you never could
So let me be
Set me off in my dark dreams
My gray eternity
My reality that isn't real
The world that could never be
This is how I see



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-Hopeless- said...
Apr. 10, 2013 at 2:47 pm:
Not big on free verse, but I like it :)
 
Lost_In_Music replied...
May 22, 2013 at 7:43 am :
Thank you :)
 
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readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 10, 2013 at 2:24 pm:
Great poem!  The only thing I could suggest is more diverse word choice, but other than that the flow and voice of this poem are outstanding!
 
Lost_In_Music replied...
May 22, 2013 at 7:41 am :
Thank you!
 
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