Like A Stone

February 17, 2013
By Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven


I'm your average piece of earth,
Feeling less then what I'm worth.
Throw me in a river, drop me in dirt.
Do anything to me because it wont hurt.
Call me boring, throw me around.
Do anything to me, I wont make a sound.
Gray and round, among thousands of others.
Guess you could call them my sisters and brothers.
Out of all the rocks, why choose me?
I'm ORDINARY, BORING, but why cant you see?
No one will remember a rock like me,
but its ok because its my destiny.



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on Feb. 3 2014 at 4:39 pm
SophiaD11 PLATINUM, Kissimmee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Intelligence without ambition is like a bird without wings."-Salvador Dali

I really love the rythem to this poem!

on Feb. 2 2014 at 11:22 pm
NatashaH26 BRONZE, New York, New York
4 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thousands of candles can be lighted from a single candle, and the life of the candle will not be shortened. Happiness never decreases by being shared. -Buddha

I've read all your poems and I like this one the best, mostly because I think as one point or another everyone one feels that they're not unique. I think you should try to go deeper into that feeling in your other peoms.

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 24 2013 at 6:20 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

I really like this one. Love the rythmn, and the personification.

on Jun. 24 2013 at 1:53 pm
mollywithane BRONZE, Jerusalem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Be that change you wish to see in the world." (Ghandi)

beautiful 

JosephW. GOLD said...
on May. 5 2013 at 8:22 pm
JosephW. GOLD, Richford, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
I know not what weapons World War 3 will be fought with, but World War 4 will be fought with sticks and stones.
-Albert Einstein

Nice. You have reasurred me that lots of us teen poets are all saying the same thing.

on May. 3 2013 at 3:09 pm
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven

Thanks    :]

on May. 3 2013 at 3:08 pm
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven

Thanks and ok, i really appreciate your help guys.

on Apr. 30 2013 at 5:23 pm
ANoOneWithAVoice GOLD, Peach Bottom, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"It's kind of fun to do the impossible." - Walt Disney

Hey, this is great. I really love it. If you want a pointer (it's fine the way it is!) You could work on your "rhythm" -that's not spelled right is it? just try and make the words flow more smoothly. But it really is good, I love what it says

on Apr. 27 2013 at 12:08 am
sammondrosch BRONZE, West Hills, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Never let the fear of striking out, keep you from playing the game."

This is really good :)

on Apr. 24 2013 at 6:59 pm
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven

thank you :)

xo_zozo GOLD said...
on Apr. 24 2013 at 5:45 pm
xo_zozo GOLD, Rochester, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities."
--Dr. Seuss

Wow, this is great!   I love it! :)

on Apr. 19 2013 at 8:33 pm
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven

Thank you :)

on Apr. 17 2013 at 9:33 pm
saracouturier SILVER, Sault Ste Marie, Other
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This is really good! :)

on Apr. 14 2013 at 6:12 pm
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven

Please give me some pointers. Thanks :)


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