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I'm your average piece of earth,
Feeling less then what I'm worth.
Throw me in a river, drop me in dirt.
Do anything to me because it wont hurt.
Call me boring, throw me around.
Do anything to me, I wont make a sound.
Gray and round, among thousands of others.
Guess you could call them my sisters and brothers.
Out of all the rocks, why choose me?
I'm ORDINARY, BORING, but why cant you see?
No one will remember a rock like me,
but its ok because its my destiny.




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JosephW. said...
May 5 at 8:22 pm:
Nice. You have reasurred me that lots of us teen poets are all saying the same thing.
 
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ANoOneWithAVoice said...
Apr. 30 at 5:23 pm:
Hey, this is great. I really love it. If you want a pointer (it's fine the way it is!) You could work on your "rhythm" -that's not spelled right is it? just try and make the words flow more smoothly. But it really is good, I love what it says
 
Bluetooth13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 3 at 3:08 pm :
Thanks and ok, i really appreciate your help guys.
 
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sammon7 said...
Apr. 27 at 12:08 am:
This is really good :)
 
Bluetooth13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 3 at 3:09 pm :
Thanks    :]
 
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xo_zozoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 24 at 5:45 pm:
Wow, this is great!   I love it! :)
 
Bluetooth13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 24 at 6:59 pm :
thank you :)
 
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Sara C. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 17 at 9:33 pm:
This is really good! :)
 
Bluetooth13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 19 at 8:33 pm :
Thank you :)
 
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Bluetooth13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 14 at 6:12 pm:
Please give me some pointers. Thanks :)
 
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