Like A Stone

February 17, 2013
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I'm your average piece of earth,
Feeling less then what I'm worth.
Throw me in a river, drop me in dirt.
Do anything to me because it wont hurt.
Call me boring, throw me around.
Do anything to me, I wont make a sound.
Gray and round, among thousands of others.
Guess you could call them my sisters and brothers.
Out of all the rocks, why choose me?
I'm ORDINARY, BORING, but why cant you see?
No one will remember a rock like me,
but its ok because its my destiny.

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SophiaD11 said...
Feb. 3, 2014 at 4:39 pm
I really love the rythem to this poem!
NatashaH26 said...
Feb. 2, 2014 at 11:22 pm
I've read all your poems and I like this one the best, mostly because I think as one point or another everyone one feels that they're not unique. I think you should try to go deeper into that feeling in your other peoms.
Kenzico This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 6:20 pm
I really like this one. Love the rythmn, and the personification.
redrose1 said...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 1:53 pm
JosephW. said...
May 5, 2013 at 8:22 pm
Nice. You have reasurred me that lots of us teen poets are all saying the same thing.
ANoOneWithAVoice said...
Apr. 30, 2013 at 5:23 pm
Hey, this is great. I really love it. If you want a pointer (it's fine the way it is!) You could work on your "rhythm" -that's not spelled right is it? just try and make the words flow more smoothly. But it really is good, I love what it says
Bluetooth13 replied...
May 3, 2013 at 3:08 pm
Thanks and ok, i really appreciate your help guys.
sammon7 said...
Apr. 27, 2013 at 12:08 am
This is really good :)
Bluetooth13 replied...
May 3, 2013 at 3:09 pm
Thanks    :]
xo_zozo said...
Apr. 24, 2013 at 5:45 pm
Wow, this is great!   I love it! :)
Bluetooth13 replied...
Apr. 24, 2013 at 6:59 pm
thank you :)
Sara C. said...
Apr. 17, 2013 at 9:33 pm
This is really good! :)
Bluetooth13 replied...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 8:33 pm
Thank you :)
Bluetooth13 said...
Apr. 14, 2013 at 6:12 pm
Please give me some pointers. Thanks :)
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