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First Shower...

Oh, there you came after all,
bringing joy like a ford
healing our wounds oh wounds,
ending misery of the bright lord.

Oh, there you came after all
fulfilling the villagers' prayer
earning them pounds, oh pounds
such a smile is so rare.

Oh there you came after all
arousing spirit of a teen in a poet
words see no bounds oh bounds
blessing for all, for the small and the tall
aroma on the lover's serenade.



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Zee.100 said...
Mar. 30, 2013 at 7:12 am
Thats really expressive and deep, great work man.
 
SLim_SHaDyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 19, 2013 at 8:34 am
Thanks man......... !!!!!
 
monkeyluvs2writeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 4:28 pm
Wow, this poem reminds of a poem I wrote called Raining Beauty.  I love your poem and I think that the repetition of the first line had a really strong impact on the poem and on the reader.
 
SLim_SHaDyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 19, 2013 at 8:35 am
Thanks dude.........
 
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