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First Shower...

Oh, there you came after all,
bringing joy like a ford
healing our wounds oh wounds,
ending misery of the bright lord.

Oh, there you came after all
fulfilling the villagers' prayer
earning them pounds, oh pounds
such a smile is so rare.

Oh there you came after all
arousing spirit of a teen in a poet
words see no bounds oh bounds
blessing for all, for the small and the tall
aroma on the lover's serenade.



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Zee.100 said...
Mar. 30 at 7:12 am:
Thats really expressive and deep, great work man.
 
SLim_SHaDy replied...
today at 8:34 am :
Thanks man......... !!!!!
 
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monkeyluvs2write said...
Feb. 12 at 4:28 pm:
Wow, this poem reminds of a poem I wrote called Raining Beauty.  I love your poem and I think that the repetition of the first line had a really strong impact on the poem and on the reader.
 
SLim_SHaDy replied...
today at 8:35 am :
Thanks dude.........
 
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