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Seven Twister MAG

January 31, 2013
By Wallace BRONZE, Edgecomb, Maine
Wallace BRONZE, Edgecomb, Maine
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
BanANA CUSTard


We sit in the canoe
He's in the back, I'm in the front.
A tapered leader twists in the evening breeze.
He hands me the green fly box,
and I open it in awe:
thirty years of collection and selection.

But I don't want the green box.
I reach for the steel case,
the selection of flies like no other.
That box was handmade in England, you know.
Your grandpa tied all the flies in there.
I pop it open.

Fingers touch
the strong black bristles
of a leech-patterned grasshopper.
Eyes scan
the streaming yellow feather of a Mickey Finn.

Finally,
I find it:
the perfect fly,
small brown plumes on both sides
with a soft white tuft on top.

I remove it from the foam ridge.
That's a great fly, Dad comments.
I slip the line through the eye
and tie it on.

Such a little knot
never made
such a strong connection.



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Wallace BRONZE said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 11:12 am
Wallace BRONZE, Edgecomb, Maine
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
BanANA CUSTard

ChrisJ. Thaaaaaaaaaaank yu sooooo muuch.  

on Mar. 26 2013 at 10:00 am
x.l.bart1 SILVER, Bath, Maine
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This poem is the best I have ever written. Ever. In my entire life.

on Feb. 8 2013 at 6:33 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

I made a strong connection with this poem. Good job!