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Promised

January 28, 2013
By SilentWriter4 SILVER, Ellington, Connecticut
SilentWriter4 SILVER, Ellington, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I'll be fine.


I promised you I'd never change my mind,
and I would never cheat.
Love is not a game,
But you made me compete.

We laughed and had fun,
together,
and with everyone,
until our love came undone.

You held my hand,
and kissed my face.
Is this the ending you had planned?
Me,alone, in this strange place.

I promised you I'd never change my mind,
and I would never cheat.
You promised too,
but as time went by,
your promise was left to die.


The author's comments:
Who can you trust if people don't keep their promises?

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on Feb. 4 2013 at 12:45 pm
TrekkieFangirlForLife SILVER, Oceanside, California
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Favorite Quote:
If your not pretty, your beautiful. if ur not beautiful, ur goregous, If ur not gorgeous, u have an unearthly beauty

holy fuuck nuggets......it's a apear to the heart. I LOVE IT!!!!!!

on Feb. 3 2013 at 5:21 pm
Sakuya PLATINUM, Richmond, Virginia
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This poem, though the subject is sad, is very nice. I'm sure plenty of people can relate and your words cut perfectly the feelings of it