Our Friendship

January 27, 2013
By WR1T3R GOLD, Bloomfield, New Mexico
WR1T3R GOLD, Bloomfield, New Mexico
10 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Laziness comes from receiving rewards without the effort'

At first I was careful
Otherwise I’d get an earful
Then I shook
I even shoved it in a nook

I tried to hide the scratches and the scars
I didn’t mean for it to go that far
I bent it till it broke
I thought it was as sturdy as an oak

I was wrong
I wish I could sing it in a song
How bad I feel
How I wish it wasn’t real

Outside it’s raining
Wash away the old it was saying
New life begins
Where the old one ends

I don’t want a new friend to replace
I want you back in that empty space
Our friendship once strong
Is now long gone…

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on Feb. 7 2013 at 3:44 pm
Mr.packerbear12 SILVER, Minnesota Lake, Minnesota
5 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Judge lest not you be judged"

"Take the plank out of your own eye before the speck out of your brother's"

"live each day as if it's your last"

"God doesn't give you what you can handle, He helps you handle what you are given"

nice writing it sounds like my frienship that went down the drain


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